|Reviews for Some plot|
| dont-even-know-anymore chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
that was really cute :3
| ARCHIVENUMBERONE chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
ROFL! That's so awesome! XD I can't get over it!
Good work. It could use improvement, but that's okay, I still love. :3
| MuchaLuchaAndMe chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Then they made out.
Cute story, anyways.
| andie000 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
That's super cute!
| Spiff101 chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Aw This short Story was Pretty Short But it was Great!
Billy X Mandy Forever!
| Leper Gnome chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Yay! I loved your story(although it's the only one I actually read so far). I'm not very sure about the GrimxMandy pair, because it seems kinda weird...But I love the BillyxMandy pairing. Nice job. :)
| Fail with Eloquence chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Aside from the minor spelling errors, I thought it was pretty good. I especially liked the way you kept Billy and Mandy in character.
Keep the stories coming!
| FuckMePumps chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Um, sorry to be a spoilsport, but Billy has an IQ of -5, while Mandy is a morbid and domineering person, and therefore, all those actions you described are highly OOC. The scene might work for other couples, but not this one.
| almostinsane chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
| ZombieZapper101 chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
This Is So Cute!
| alisha marie chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Awe, what a cute fic! :) Yes, everyone is pretty much IC...
I liked that Mindy had to kiss Irwin those two are pretty good together popular girl/Nerd thing I usualy like those kinds of things. I love the Billy and Mandy moments in here to, Like Mandy geting carried away with the kiss, And Billy promising he won't tell.
Great job on this fic... the only problem I had with it was, it could have been longer. ah, oh well.