Reviews for Picking up the Pieces
Windy City Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I really loved this. The style was wonderful and the descriptions were excellent. The characters were down pat. I was transfixed. Felt like I was right there, watching. I can't even explain all the reasons why, but I just plain love it. The story, especially the last paragraph, was perfection.
KG-613 chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
I have been putting off reading this story but honestly I LOVE IT!

LosingInTranslation chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Nicely done!

I loved the fact that you gave them both the consciousness of guilt that kept them from crossing those lines completely.
HPFreak4life chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Wow...this is really very good. Loving the very last paragraph. To me the whole story was written very nicely.

Hope to read some more of your stories,

Joan Powers chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Love the style of this piece and that Warrick is honest enough to admit that he's made a mistake and wants to fix it.