Reviews for Picking up the Pieces
Windy City Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I really loved this. The style was wonderful and the descriptions were excellent. The characters were down pat. I was transfixed. Felt like I was right there, watching. I can't even explain all the reasons why, but I just plain love it. The story, especially the last paragraph, was perfection.
KG-613 chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
I have been putting off reading this story but honestly I LOVE IT!

~kate
LosingInTranslation chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Nicely done!

I loved the fact that you gave them both the consciousness of guilt that kept them from crossing those lines completely.
HPFreak4life chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Wow...this is really very good. Loving the very last paragraph. To me the whole story was written very nicely.

Hope to read some more of your stories,

~Lauren~
Joan Powers chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Love the style of this piece and that Warrick is honest enough to admit that he's made a mistake and wants to fix it.

Joan