|Reviews for Veela genes|
| marthapreston4 chapter 20 . 7/6
if he is under truth potion he wouldnt be able to talk his way out of it or say no then yes
| marthapreston4 chapter 19 . 7/6
this felt like stalling you were going to interrogate lucious but never did
| marthapreston4 chapter 17 . 7/6
super confused the weasley twins still have arthur bill,and charlie so they wouldnt be the only weasley
| marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 3/10
They forgave each other fast
| Loveless150050 chapter 4 . 2/5
Will Draco find out of Harry's real form?
| HyperOwl-Loves-Kitsunes chapter 23 . 2/2
I'm so sorry about your dad. Take all the time you need.
| AliceCullen3 chapter 27 . 12/31/2014
| Prince Itzal chapter 28 . 4/20/2014
Aww I was looking forwArd to the ending 'pouty face'
| Madison chapter 28 . 7/26/2013
My condolences. It was a very nice read. Be sure to know if will continue to read the stories you write.
| PandoraScar Ayakashi Blackhart chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
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| Jackie-B-123 chapter 28 . 12/31/2012
I am sorry for the various terrible things that have happened to you over the course of your writing this story. I shall endeavor to send many good thoughts your way & to remember you in my prayers. I shall also none-the-less be favoriting & following this story in the hopes that you do indeed update and continue it at some point in the future. I have quite enjoyed it you see, and I am ever so reluctant to completely forget about it. If you do decide to finally continue this story, then you can most certainly expect a review upon every chapter posted hereafter. However if this is indeed to be the end, I thank you for a delightful escape from reality, and for a wonderfully spun story. Again I shall remember you in my prayers, and I accept the fact that this story is on hiatus.
| SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 28 . 12/6/2012
Was a great read, thank you for writing
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I always imagine harry with and anime hair cut like the hair cut from hiroto form kiraarin revolution...and most of the boys in mangas...
| FreyrFnk chapter 2 . 8/24/2012
you know... i'm not certain you understand what a castle is...
painted walls... tile flooring... and why would hogwarts randomly have an insuite apartment? the only room magically modifiable was the room of requirement it's why it was so special. i could understand private chambers converted to a living quarters... but a random kitchen? in a castle ... a magical castle with children who have no method of leaving said magical castle to purchase food... have a kitchen in an apartment... that conveniently exists... when they have a master kitchen full of house elves to make food...
everyone is beyond ooc narcissa sounds like a little girl, there are things that look like copy and paste from other stories or perhaps it is vice versa which really does kill any form of mark... each author could lay on the idea. there is horrid formatting, without anything to denote the time before a time skip so that one paragraph ends and it just rushes directly into the next. harry is far too calm and collected, molly too psycho and draco too... not draco. veela or no.
and gryffindor red should never never never be mixed with blue. color coordination people. please not that difficult. it's a castle; stone floors and walls i'm sure there would be some baroque embellishment, area rugs in netural tones - green bed, red bed done. tasteful aesthetically pleasing and workable for a CASTLE instead of bruce wayne's penthouse.
| Der Puppenmacher chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
harry is quite thick lol