|Reviews for Respira|
| The Illustrious Crackpot chapter 7 . 10/31/2006
Another great story! Very sentimental, very touching, also true to BOTH source materials ("Mary" and "The Rat From Perfecto"). The only thing was, it seemed like too serious of a story to have the funny bloopers at the end, but I'll cope. ("a bag of cookies is suddenly thrown out of the bathroom...")
| loonytunecrazy chapter 7 . 8/13/2006
Good story of Rubelle POV
| Nightw2 chapter 7 . 5/25/2006
Hey, sorry I took a while to get back to you on this, but I have to admit that you did a great job on this piece. I definitely have to salute you. :-D
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 5/22/2006
Excelente historia! Llena perfectamente todos los detalles sobre como Monty preparó la cacería, y la reacción de Rhubella. Muy intenso, con una excelente descripción.
Me alegra que mi historia te haya servido. Gracias.
Keep the good writing.