|Reviews for Manticore Moments|
| Alexis 234 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
what causes alec seizure disoder
| l chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Aww Max was so incredibly harsh to Alec. I kinda wish you had made a second chapter on Alec's seizures getting so bad he almost dies, then Max would feel sorry. Thanks for this, Max/Alec ftw! ;D
| blubblubblubblub chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
| twasadark chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
A well-written, satisfying piece! Hope you've written more DA!
| heartfallen chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Awesome story and nice ending
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
| Xdaisy chainX chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
lol, good fic,
i wish dark angel was still on
| glorfinniel chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Very very good - really enjoyed reading this fic :)
| MonicaMeMe chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Hehe! That was great! Very in-character and the Max/Alec dynamic was closer to the canon than I thought possible! Really loved the ending :) Well done!
| darkangelgirl262 chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Hi! I loved this! funny, and serious! I liked your writing! I hope Alec will be o.k... so, is this going to have chap 2? I really hope so! so update? plz? ;)
| flaymzofice chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
I loved your dialogue. I don't think I've read a piece which captures the balane between the three so well. Their attitudes, their tones and their mannerisms. You hit the mark better than anything else I've read.
I don't think you got the tryptophan explanation quite right; it makes sense but the reason Max's unit broke out in the first place was because she had the seizures bad enough to warrant being dragged off so in context of her character, it doesn't work.
Still, the rest of the story was good enough for me not to even really bother with that inconsistency except that you explicitly drew attention to it lol.
| Taiven chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Hehehe Great story. I felt pretty sorry for Alec... Anyway, I really enjoyed it, great job!
| annie200 chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
This was fun. I like M/A verbal sparring matches, and you wrote this well.
| Kiwikatipo chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
No good explanation.
| AKA DD chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
I love your Max! She's awesome in this!