|Reviews for Shattered Innocence|
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/30/2016
| Amanda A Fox chapter 18 . 8/28/2016
Very awesome. I love it. Thanks and kiss
| CaitiAthena chapter 14 . 7/20/2016
I'm going to say this once, Cross seems to be line Allen' odd and overprotective father.
| CaitiAthena chapter 13 . 7/20/2016
poor Allen, every one's against him
| CaitiAthena chapter 12 . 7/20/2016
| CaitiAthena chapter 7 . 7/9/2016
| CaitiAthena chapter 5 . 7/9/2016
well that just happened
| fem-nova chapter 18 . 1/17/2016
The ending was a Good ending,but you know not the one I wanted but so oddly satisfing,your writing is beautiful. I never really write reviews but this made me cry,so much I just /Had/ Keep up the good work -Queenie
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/5/2015
I hate it. Uwaaaaaa
Why did they have to be separated from their child?
Just kill those stupid commanders n pick new ones.
| Gusty Guest chapter 18 . 8/10/2015
*gets shot in the feels* mmmmm whacha saaaaaaaay...
| Vheheroamerica chapter 18 . 8/3/2015
Ah ha no why! Poor Allen and kanda! They had to give up their little Lucy again! I really got me when she called allen 'Uncle allen'
(Crying in corner going "why! Poor Allen and kanda waaa!)
An hour later. OK now that that's out of my system I want to say that you guys totally rock! I love this fan fic so much! You guys totally rule!
P.S. I also read the sequel to this stoy, I almost started to cry again. (Poor kanda, Lucy got mad at him.) I liked the way you guys showed the battle scenes! You should write another one continuing after the sequel.
I love the way you guys write and loved the idea for this story.
| Shadow Spears chapter 18 . 8/1/2015
Man that was fucked up! You got me crying and stuff, chest hurting...Man don't even get me started about the commanders and shit, bunch of arseholes! But seriously, this was a good story. ...BUT THE ENDING IS STILL BEAUTIFULLY FUCKED UP! Q_Q
| IreneHime chapter 18 . 3/29/2015
one of the Best Fanfics I ever read
| wildfire chapter 18 . 3/20/2015
ooohhhh! That was so sweet and sad all at the same time! To be anisette I cried supper hard.
| nezumi dark chapter 8 . 3/13/2015
A girl no boy baby