Reviews for Fragility
Celtic Spacey chapter 2 . 5/22/2006
Awesome story so far! I really like Shandra, it's so sad about her mutation! Update soon!
Do Re Mi 123 chapter 2 . 5/22/2006
I like how you've taken the time to explain what's happening to Shandra. Some times people do this and make the dialogue dry, but you've stayed committed to the characters so you've avoided this. Logan's character is very well written, and Shandra seems like a good character too, I hope her story ends well...

update soon!
Do Re Mi 123 chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
This sounds really cool, I like the way zou've written it.
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