|Reviews for Pie, the new Flaming Monkeys|
| mimbulus-mimbletonia chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
thats so random :D
| mayoandsnickers chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
That was...strange. The A/Ns are only disrupting the already inconsistent flow of plot. I would suggest taking them out. I know every author's style of writing coincides with their location-but, 'mad skills'? This is what Draco Malfoy, son of the highly regarded and esteemed Lucius Malfoy with an aristocratic (in)breeding would dare to say? Unless, of course, Draco has been talking with the house-elves, who-oh yes, I forget-are British as well. Unless my memory is failing me, I believe that hte house-elves have even worse grammar than...well...whomever says 'mad skills'.
Sex with hats? Oh that perverted, repressed, little boy. ;)