|Reviews for Acellaron|
| Harzlek chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
I'm not sure if this is necessary. I feel as though you put very minimal effort in this. If I may ask, but how often do you read? perhaps if you read a few science fiction books and paid particular attention on how they describe the technology and how the dialogue is handled, you may get a great boost to your skills. I suggest the Dune series, since it focuses heavily on psychology.
| Nukey chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
a little farfetched, butif you slow it down a bit more, shoud turn out okay