Reviews for The Cage Part One: Fading Dreams Chapter One
black hand of set chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
its well written, but a little hard to follow
ProphIt chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Sort of .. Strange ..

And why don't you use contractions at all? It messes up a sentence. It's just weird to imagine someone who doesn't use contractions, ever. . .