|Reviews for Mercenaries:Blood Money|
| BearfootTruck chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
The grammar & spelling was messy, and I wasn't a fan of the script-type format, but this wasn't excessively bad.
| Sgt.Davi chapter 2 . 6/15/2006
I'm very sorry, but the first chapter...was a rip off of the origianl script. The second chapter was...wow...omg, big gun this bug gun that. My advice? Make it original. take the story away from the Song initiative...Oh and bringing Otacon into it...ruined it...