|Reviews for Metal Gear Solid: Fight of Metal Gears 2|
| Bacon Powder chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
THERE IS NO SUCK THING AS A NUKE THAT KILLS METAL GEARS. and wtf is jakes obsession with Metal Gears anyway? He has no reason to be mad about metal gears. And why is Jake talking like a cave man? I shoot you with fire gun? I will admit the one funny part was how Ocelot shot Jake in the eye which should have killed him but didn't for some reason.
| God chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
| MyGummymortal chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I Loved the Fanfic and until it Ended and Was good
| derpmanherpity chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
| Norion chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This is almost as good as Spiderses.
| Derptacular chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Wow that was horrible.
| single action army dog chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
| Roy-Fan-33 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I THINK MR. RAYMOND BENSON WOULD LIKE A WORD WITH YOU. Who do you think you art, waltzing into the Horrible Metal Gear Solid Story scene all young and spry when HE'S been ruining the fandom for YEARS with his published books!
(The rest of us can only hope the two of you someone kill one another for the, "Worst MGS Story Ever" title...)
| Manager Of The Abyss chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I did not know, until you I read this, that a writer has the capacity to butcher the English language to this degree. Kudos for the education
| PHER chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
This sentence alone:
Revolver Ocelot jumped away and landed and shot Jake Snake in the eyes so Jake Snake had to get an eye patch out of his pocket and he put it on then he shot Revolver Ocelot but Revolver Ocelot ran away after so Jake Snake had to follow him.
Made reading your story worth
Please liste to my plea, we want a crossover with Jake Snake who was Solid Snake's son, John Freeman Who was Gordon Freeman's brother and Rain Strife who was Cloud Strife's brother.
Feel free to add Julius Clarke who was nephew of Dead Space's Isaak Clarke, Kuranka who was the sister of Street Fighter II's Blanka, and Tara Croft who was the daughter of Lara Croft...
| Jets chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
This. Is. Epic.
| shadow chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Even if someone proofread all your stories perfectly, they still wouldn't could because concept and plot for most of them is totally retarded
| BadFic Critic chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
| Jake chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I came... twelve times.
| Kathryn Shadow chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Come on! You can't leave it there! You must finish this gripping and totally believable tale!
...please? -big sad eyes and robot dog-