|Reviews for She'll Never Say I'm Sorry|
| victorvondouche chapter 5 . 4/19/2011
Hello! Um.. I hate to ask and be a burden, but I have a rreealllyy good idea for this story, so, if your not going to finish it, well maybe do you think that..i could finish it? If no i totally understand and if yes, i thank you greatly!
Love always, kat.
| slagondrayer chapter 5 . 8/6/2007
This is my opinion on all 5 chapters hence the length:
Your opening prologue is a masterpiece in my books. You've created a haunting portrait of Akito on the brink of death, and the brewing cauldron of love, hate, anger, pain that awaits to discovery by the others. Her shadow is set to fall a long way accross their futures, with the ominous foreboding thatperhaps the one she casts in death will even be longer than the one she cast in life. Haunting and brilliant.
The dry, griefless air of the funeral is fitting, and I got this feeling of stillness, a calm before the storm with the zodiac caught in an emotional limbo, unknowingly waiting for such a thing to break and whisk them away into its emotional chaos.
I understand Tohru's insatiable curiosity although I would have gone a different way with her attempts to reason away her guilt at prying. It might be my own admittedly very strong bias against her but Tohru strikes me as someone who doesn't dig too deeply into her motivations for doing things and is more than ready to believe that she's really doing what she does 'for the greater good', so I'd probably have brought the empathy and trying to help angle in from the first reading of the diary. That said, with the route you've gone, you've captured the eroding effects of curiosity on one's morals quite well _. As someone who has argued that chocolate should count to thedairy and vegetable portion of a balanced diet, I know I cringed at the familiar downwards spiral as one gives in to temptation, justifying each step down into the abyss as you take it and ever-proclaiming that you won't take the next.
The final scene of Shigure breaking down is, for me, the portrait of a breaking heart sounding the first thunder of the storm. This is a really good story although unfinished *hint*, (and it's touche as now I have to rethink a story I was working on because the ideas expressed here are the same and you've hit them on the head far better than I've been able to). Having said all that, there are few stories I'd care for even unfinished, and this is one of them.
| One Foot Forward chapter 5 . 8/24/2006
I thought Akito was a guy?
| laumae chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
this really good, I look forward to the next part. :)
| Lady Charity chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
this is a really good story. everyone is IC (in character), which is not always an easy feat! my a-chan...dead...then again, she was in a way Shigure/Kureno's...argh Akkigure scares me so i always wish it was Akkireno, but i feel that Arisa and Kureno are a better couple, but a-chan needs him...gahh im confused w/ myself. Keep up the great work, u haven't updated in a while
| Kristine.D chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
EEH! Can't wait. That was so cute, and I loved the little scene with Shigure at the end. Hohoho...naughty Tohru. Anyways, I think you forgot to change that (line)'s throughout the story into actual line spacers. Haha ;;. ANyways, update sooN!
| Idiotic Stupidty Person chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
your making me so confused now. at first i thought the 'she' was talking about akito, but now in your author's note, i'm not so sure anymore. although i can't think who else would never say sorry. oh well, guess i need to keep reading. okay, questions: who old was akito when he/she started the dairy? and who did he/she mean 'even the one who got away'? was it kureno, the one that had the rooster spirit left his body, or was it shigure that slept with ren?
| Daelaeyni chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
this is getting better and better! keep it up!
| Inulvr89 chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! It is so well written. It's awesome. I'm awe struck as to how great it is. Just perfect. Looking forward to the update.
| Kristine.D chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
Nice chapter, but I didn't find the AkiiGure moments/entries. Maybe they were to subtle for me to notice? I don't know. One pointer though, I think that when you wrote the diary entires, they were a bit tedious and very choppy. That made them kind of hard to read at times, also when you wrote about Akito ranting about how they are all mine, it was a bit "boring" and I skipped most of it. Other than that it was an interesting chapter.
| Suiryoka chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
_ Even though I was never planning on not continuing to read the story, your little preview or hinting of great chapters to come later on has made me ecstatic! XD Can't wait for the next update, ILB!
| Spirit Of Innocence chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
OH MY GOD! SO GREAT! GREAT, GREAT, GREAT! I LOVE YOU! -glomps- Oh! -dies- I love this story so much! I LOVE IT! It's so great and fantastic and great _ You do Akito perfectly! I can't get over it! Are you sure you're not really Natsuki Takaya in disgise O.o AW! I love it! I fell so bad for Akito now! I'm never gonna be able to look at him/her the same way ever again! -cries- YOUR WRITING IS SO BEAUTIFUL! UPDATE SOON!
| Raven Hoyatsu chapter 3 . 6/17/2006
when you said: 'review or Akito's ghost will haunt you' im already haunted by every ghost that seems to hate me for no reason at all...heh...i kid i kid! im only haunted by the 'god' of fruits basket, Akito...heh...i dont need him to come again so soon...heh...sorry...i just cant stop talking right now...anywho, its a good story! cant wait to continue later when you update...heh...bye!
| Inulvr89 chapter 3 . 6/16/2006
O.O NOT AKITO-SAN'S GHOST! AKITO-SAN, I'M SORRY I WAITED SO LONG TO TYPE THIS! *bows* forgive me! ... Another really well written chapter. I love how you have really captured the personalities of the Furuba characters. I love this story. PLease update soon.
| Aziza Icefire chapter 3 . 6/16/2006
I want to be haunted by Akito's ghost 0.o
PLZ UPDATE I WANNA C WHAT GOES ON IN MY PRECIOUS AKI-CHAN'S HEAD! PLZ DO A FAVOR FOR ALL THE AKITO-FANS IN THE WORLD! IM INTERESTED! *AND THAT'S NOT AN EASY FEAT*
precious akito, my akito, meheheheh...