Reviews for Taking Control
Guest chapter 13 . 6/29
just an FYI: Lions cannot pur. 4 cats in the world cannot pur, Lions, Tigers, Leopards and Jaguars (panthers are either all black Leopards or all black Jaguars depending where they're from)
reader-139 chapter 1 . 6/24
I really enjoyed this fic. A few things irked me but overall it was very well written and one of the only good fics that I have come across. The only major thing was I didnt really enjoy Hermione’s characterisation it was partially in check with her character but I defiantly got a character bashing vibe but overall I throughly enjoyed this. xxx
Player4o6 chapter 28 . 6/22
I am in tears right now... I only download stories that have a “completed” marker on them... so I thought I wouldn’t be left hanging... turns out there is a sequel that hasn’t been updated in 7 years... to all future readers, this is a great story but it has no ending.
Hpforever chapter 28 . 6/11
Gasp ,you can't end like this its too good to end.
Master of Energy chapter 28 . 5/27
an exciting ending to be sure
Thebeanonscene chapter 3 . 5/23
First I want to commend you for one of the absolute most organic character and relationship developments I’ve encountered on this site. Possibly THE most. And I’ve read a couple hundred of them now starting from the top rated moving down. Thank you for this story, it’s been a pleasure and there was so MUCH of it. I love that. One thing I’d like to point out though that had me laughing uncontrollably was in chapter three when harry was listening in on tonks and remus discussing harry in the leaky. you said and I quote “Harry mentally CASTRATED himself” lolololol. I’m pretty sure yo meant berated but if you’re unsure of what castrate means, please look it up. I assure you you’ll get a kick out of it haha. But thank you again. Truly
emily4498 chapter 28 . 4/24
This is a perfect ending. I hope there's a sequel!
You did a really good job with this story! I like how you kept the characters, especially Harry, but still allowed them to go through their own character arcs.
Mostly Human chapter 28 . 4/16
i have not slept in two days lololol great story
Insanity Studios Ink chapter 1 . 4/2
I think I would like my animagus to be either a pigeon or a seagull. If you think about it, they are the perfect animagus for someone who's trying to remain unseen in both worlds. Muggles would quickly put a panther or a wolf in the zoo, but no one would suspect a pigeon, not even an Auor. (Damnit, why can't I spell that right! Ahh!)
Blackbelt219 chapter 10 . 3/21
I really think u should bash ron and hermoine even more. They are so annoying.
LtKettch chapter 28 . 3/17
Excellent work. You are a very talented and creative writer. You definitely created your own story within the HP world. Normally, I gravitate towards HHG, but I really liked what you did with Harry and Ginny. Reflecting on the end of the book, Hermione’s behavior seems extreme, but when really considered, it is a possible natural outcome of her character within the HP books. I look forward to the sequel.
ScarletWraith chapter 28 . 3/16
OMFG! Epic! Loved it!
ScarletWraith chapter 5 . 3/14
Did you mean Kyle Stevens was reserve keeper?
Cressenta chapter 1 . 3/4
I wrote a review of "Free Life" and I want to say that You are an amazing writer. If I had to pay to read this book I would. You have an amazing view on what should have happened and I'd love to read more. I read your authors note on the last chapter you published and I respect your choices and completely understand loosing interest in a story. But I think that if you read your story again and see all the wonderful comments you could start again. This fanfic has inspired me to write my own fanfic. It won't be as amazing as this book, but it's a start. I hope you realize how many people love this story and continue it. Read my review on Free Life and think about writing an ending. I am positive that I will reread this fanfic just like I would reread the Harry Potter series. In fact I think that Taking Control could replace HBP entirely. The story goes with J.K.'s theme and you really represented the characters correctly. I can tell that you put a lot of time, effort, passion, and research into this story and hope that this review will bring forth all of that once more.
Guest chapter 28 . 2/22
Is there more? Please please please write more!
3,004 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »