5/10- Unfortunately I can't rate this story as high as I would've liked. The first 15 or so chapters are very promising but it's all downhill after that. Chapters 16-28 are mostly just fluff/inconsequential which made it very hard to read sometimes. Also the way Ron and Hermione are portrayed in this is quite repulsive. Finally, as the reader I don't have to agree with all the decisions you make in your fanfiction but I think you gave Harry some very unlikeable traits and removed some of his better ones such as his humor. Overall its quite disappointing 500k words and there really was not much of a story and it became way to repititive. I don't need to know that harry was going on his morning run for the 500th time after a certain point I can just assume.

Right up until the last encounter (no spoilers this way) I thought this a wonderful, amazing change of pace.
But the last bit killed it for me.

This is a great story but i don’t really feel it is complete.

I am thoroughly enjoying this. I just hope Harry doesn’t mess with Ginny’s feelings with Jessica.

Judt a comment. Do english kids still saya few minutes away” rather than a couple of blocks. When i was Harry’s age, it was always talked about in terms of time as few UK towns have proper blocks of buildings.

where is the rest?

just ranting... I hate to write fics where one side of the war kills, and the other have this high ground morale about not killing... thats the stupid thing i have ever saw... really? you went to war and dont kill? how do you pretend to win a war without weaking the opposition? and they arent winning at all, cause every time his side win a battle, the death eaters just vanish and come back later to fight again...

Awesome story. Glad I decided to read it again.
My favorite Hinny story that KB0 didn’t write.
Too bad the sequel will likely never be completed. Bummer.

I'm half hoping someone accuses him off being a werewolf of he keeps "getting sick" during the full moon

I really really hope we get to see more of Harry teasing people.

Wow, that was insane! I can't wait to read the next one!

Harry answering him with 'magic' is one of the most ruthless things ever, and I love it.

Thank goodness!

I have to admit, I don't really understand Harry's need for a house. He could just stay in his trunk. Find a good spot to hid it, put wards around it, and live in there. It has a kitchen and a bathroom already. Why wouldn't he just save the money?

Hahaha, it was only a matter of time really.

You came up with the perfect solution! Also, I find it very funny that everyone thinks that there are two boys fighting, and one of them is a panther and one is a bird. Now I guess Remus will never be able to see if Harry is Jim or not.