|Reviews for Taking Control|
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/6/2013
You know until this very moment I thought the bat-bogey hex was bats not boogers, evidently American and British slang def got in the way of that. Even other fic writers say its actual bats.
Thx 4 the clarity
| Susan M. M chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
After seeing so many stories where Ginny is either a hopeless fan girl, or worse, a social-climbing gold-digger who wants to be Lady Potter and spend Harry's money, even if she has to use a love potion to catch him, it's refreshing to see a story where Ginny had a crush on Harry as a young girl, then outgrew it and wanted to get to know the real Harry as she herself began to grow up. Plausible, yes, quite plausible.
| ShokAndAwe chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Nothing much I can say apart from good job.
A really good Ginny/Harry fanfic with a really nice plot and concept.
| starry eyed dreamer6 chapter 28 . 10/29/2013
Amazing. This story is very well written and interesting. How do you think of all of these things? I'm not one for thinking up complex plots, although I enjoy reading them! I loved the Harry/Ginny, and how you wrote Neville. I must sdmit, a few parts dragged on a bit towards the end, but overall, very good. I have to say, it took me a while to read! Most of my weekend and most of the night was spent on this, and I don't regret it. The end seemed a bit abrupt, but it is a good ending for a sequel, which I can't wait to read!
| mumlock chapter 28 . 10/18/2013
Great story. Not too much over the top, everything holds together and one cannot stop reading.
| Irritated chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
This is the point where in I decided to stop reading your fiction. I appreciate the idea of not having Harry be an idiot, I a irritated both with how you are creating an unnatural relationship between Harry and Ginny, and with the dual animal forms,
| Smaragdphnix chapter 28 . 9/29/2013
It's one of the best Storys I have ever read!
| Feahthum chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
Only three single letters to describe the story. WOW
I first read the german translation (cause im german.. ), but it takes so much time for a chapter. One or two months. I could not wait to read further so I read the story in english. It was not always easy because i dunno some words but it was definitely worth it. In my opinion the best story i've ever read. Although I'm a little sad that this story is now over but fortunately there is a sequel. Which unfortunately is not brought to an end. But it's also worth reading.
Yeaaaah, love this story :)
I still hope that you may continue writing. Your writing style is just wonderful. Hope dies only when I die and maybe not even then. Internet in heaven?
Greetings - André
| AlyssPotter chapter 9 . 9/20/2013
I love how you ended this chapter, so sweet! I've already read this a few times, but I'm not sure if I've reviewed yet. I just wanted to say you've done a stellar job on this story. Do you think you'll be writing a wrong-boy-who-lived story? Pleeeaaaaase do!
| nayin17 chapter 8 . 9/13/2013
really hate cho
| Guest chapter 28 . 9/1/2013
Read it again, it took some time but I'm working reading the sequ now.
| herart chapter 5 . 8/31/2013
I was a bit skeptical about reading this one, but the writing is good and the story it's going ok so far.
In this chapter, the insight of Ginny towards Herm and Ron is actually pretty good.
| Magnive chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Oh god, I just realized that I finished this story in about five days. It does explain why I felt like I wasn't getting enough sleep, though.
I have often been annoyed by the way that Harry seems to be rather inept in actual duels in the canon. While it's nice to see him fighting a Basilisk, I quite like the Harry we see here. Powerful, possibly a bit too much, but still not mindblowingly powerful - especially when you consider how much time he spends training :D
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/27/2013
This is a great story and the only thing I didn't like about it was how much of a b**ch you made hermione.
| kase519 chapter 28 . 8/26/2013
What an ending