Reviews for A new team, different sensei
Guest chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Don’t really care about pairing. I am much more concerned about Naruto’s affinity. Without wind, how will he master the rasengan?
icemaxprime chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
Ok this is well written but instead of putting your A/N IN the story put them all at the bottom with numbered annotations(1) like so.

1 annotations it's a medium ised to add extra information within breaking the flow of of a paragraph/story

Because putting AN in the paragraph that's telling the story it becomes jarring and destroys Immersion and kills any plot twist or progression.

This is well written and well done indeed. I hope these are fixed in later chapters because I do enjoy this story so far. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2017
Overpowered OC? Bye bye.
Anime Princess chapter 19 . 11/19/2015
Wow, so the 3 have broken up. Sasuke is an A-class missing non too. Love it! I can't wait to see what and how each one advances. I do hope Jaraiya teaches Naruto how to use Minato's/Arashi's Hirashin ninjutsu too. As Yondaime's hier he has the best right to use it even before Tenshi
Guest chapter 13 . 11/5/2015
Naruto Dad is Minato Namikaze and his mother is Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze
Guest chapter 4 . 11/2/2015
You should do the charaka paper. We all know naruto is wimd so you should make up something for salura and into.
Valiryo chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
I want to keep reading but those long explanations really suck the enthusiasm out of you... D;
J Oy Me chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Who the hell is Harona Sakura? the Fuck... Grammatical error, the name of the character, typos, and a LOT! more.. did you not read it again before you publish it? or where's your beta?
well, but your story of this idea is refreshing, so just keep writing more and look at other's for upgrading your skill's...
-Jeanne
hubnnick chapter 5 . 5/21/2015
I think someone need to tell naruto side affect of shadow clone jutsu
hubnnick chapter 2 . 5/21/2015
I honk both girls well do
midnightscar17 chapter 15 . 11/25/2014
You suck at spelling also its minito Namikaze and kushina uzumaki. Learn to use proper names you idiot
midnightscar17 chapter 6 . 11/24/2014
You suck at grammar you put thought when you meant taught n u put taught properly in the following sentence n thts just when error
midnightscar17 chapter 4 . 11/24/2014
Ever thought of using chakra paper instead. Also naruto is good with wind not fire n lightening. Sakura is good with water n earth u idiot
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
I don't really like the white wolf so far. Don't know why. Just something about him. Maybe just cause the story is really OC.
talon19912 chapter 19 . 8/3/2013
great job! i look forward to reading more
814 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »