Reviews for Conversation
shadowcat15 chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Short, but deep.
Mipeltaja chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
I liked this story, it's slightly bittersweet.

However, it's also in dire need of spellcheck. Five spelling mistakes is a lot for 392 words.
erika chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
The idea is good, but you could use a beta-reader for your spelling. There are several misspellings here, the most glaring of which is the name of one of your main characters - our favorite frog hermit is named Jiraiya, not Jaraiya.
Somnium Lacertae chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
nice. absolutely nice.

maybe a little short, but all the same it had everything it needed.

i really liked it, and how you put it down, neat and simple.

Gai knew exactly what to do, did he? *hugs*

I like how you, without many words, conveyed so much feelings and emotions.

thanks for sharing

Rhylin Sweet chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Simply adorable. I thought this was gonna be Jiraiya/Gai. i was...trembling. but it was KakaGai so that mkaes things SANE again or slight KakaGai. But i liked this one super awesome XD