|Reviews for Silver Prince|
| LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Update please. I dont see why they treat Dudley better, Harrys lived with them practicly his whole life they raised Harry he's like their son.
| fifespice chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
ooh good start please updaet this as youve not done so ina ges
| DebsTheSnapeFan chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
cool cant wait until u update
| Roxie Faye chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
At least you write well. That's a lot more than I can say for some of the writers of the Harry Potter fandom. *snickers*
Good spelling and grammar (and by grammar I mean language. Syntax, placement, wording. The diction is good - lots of 'tones' conveyed with it!).
I can't really say much because it's such a 'preliminary' chapter (background chapter is what I mean. You know, gives you information on how Harry has been raised differently. No real action yet...).
My only problem with the story is Uncle Vernon: Why does he treat Harry so... *normally* when, in canon, he hate Harry's guts for being a wizard? Will you explain this in story? o.o'(Or did I miss it? I skimmed several parts because I'm a jerk. _