This was really good. I can just see Ron and Harry getting worked up about the shampoo guy. Please write more.

this story is very good so far! i love the detailing and the length of all the chapters. keep up the great work and update soon so i can read it sooner!

this was a good chapter i liked it a lot and i hope u update soon

cool I like it very much

hey the story looks good so far I want to know whats going on with ron's feelings about hermoine.

great story please email me when a new chapter comes up

this was a good chapter i hope u update soon

I really do like it and boy I can't wait for something to really happene to ron and Hermione

aww that was cute! i loved it! really great! update soon!

i love this so far! it's really great! unfortunantly i might not be able to read the next chapter(s)until july because i'm going to camp! i look forward to more when i get back though!

this was cute i hope u update soon

i love it! let's update son, i'll wait for it by my tolerable. hee hee!

I'd just like to point out that in your disclaimer, you said "I do not own Harry Potter. All I have is my imagination and good grammar." and yet in the second sentence of the story, you say, "The Dr. Grangers left early that morning for there yearly honeymoon vacation," and you are using the wrong form of the word "their" in that spot. It should be "their," not "there."

And I most likely spelled "their" wrong because for some odd reason it's looked wrong every time I've written it today, but whatever.

the rest of the story seems good though!

I like it!