Reviews for Emotions
Guest chapter 13 . 6/25/2014
After all of that and he still leaves! Bella never ends up being changed, etc. where's the true resolution to this story. Very disappointed with it. :( Spent quite a bit of time reading this to be left hanging. Waste of time
PoseyRosey chapter 10 . 8/4/2013
I love how you added E pov
PoseyRosey chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
WOW! Great chapter, nice twist, having Rosalie take on the traditional role of Alice :)
PoseyRosey chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
It is great to read a story that starts with E & B already in their relationship. I am enjoying this so far :)
Al3xisCull3n chapter 13 . 7/23/2011
Are you going to do a sequel? You really should that was one of the best story's i have ever read!
Al3xisCull3n chapter 7 . 7/22/2011
Are you a angel? Coz this story is like my heaven! It is really good! And I regret every word I type in this review because it is taking away valuable reading time! Soo bye!
Al3xisCull3n chapter 6 . 7/22/2011
Wow!
Al3xisCull3n chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
:o. Soooo good!
Al3xisCull3n chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
Ahww I love Alice! I can just imagine Edward in that silly outfit and laughed! I wonder what's going on? Alice said it was Vella who tells someone by why would bella tell? Hmmm I guess I will just have to read on :) x
Al3xisCull3n chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
That was really really really good! I like the fact you change the presents and made then soo much better! I also love the fact nothing disastrous or life threatinig happened which is always good for a first chapter! And in your authors not you said you thought it dragged well let me tell you it did not drag at all not even one teeny tiny bit! I could go on and on about how good this is but I need to have a human moment and go in the shower so this will be all! Can't wait to read more, so bye! Xx
Twixika chapter 13 . 8/19/2009
hmm the ending is realy sad. I must admit it, I don't like it... It made me cry... I think it would be more sad if you first change her and then made him leave beacouse he find's out that he loves irina... If it should be a drama make it a perfect one :D
queenwanghu chapter 7 . 2/11/2009
Great one...:D continue..:D
IceDancex chapter 13 . 12/26/2008
okay i must admit, it was a very long story!

I loved it to bits and i think i only spotted maybe three or four spelling and grammar mistakes out of the whole story! Well done!

Just one question tho...are you writing a sequel?

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ThatChickThereCharron chapter 13 . 7/17/2008
you should write a sequel to it and see how it goes but your right i dont like the ending to this story it really makes edward seem like a jerk
Edward4eva chapter 9 . 3/17/2008
please there has to be a sequel
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