Senior bashing and father/son Gibbs and Tony. What more could I ask for?

Gibbs is many things, but he doesn't usually break a promise, especially early seasons Gibbs, so Tony should have known better.

Thank you for sharing this story.

nice one

So why bring up Michael Gambino, if you weren't going to explore it further? Other then to denote Dinozzo Sr was a smile ball, which you made abundantly clear, there was no purpose to the name dropping. Otherwise it was a good story.

I love the way you depict Tony and Gibbs' relationship and Tony's father is a great villain in this!

A great story.
Tony needed to stand up to his father and know that he is the better, and braver, man.

I hope this means that Senior is out of Tony’s life!

Good story. Tonys' dad always seems to have some kind of scam or something going that usually involves poor Tony in some way.

Great story. I was expecting Sr to be planning on scamming Tony out of an inheritance from his aunt Theresa but his just being a control freak was skeezy enough. Never thought he'd try to murder his own son though.

Very impressive first NCIS story. Great tension, great characterization, creative situation and creative solution.

Loved it!

Great story!

Loved it! :)

Very good story. :D Well written.