Reviews for Pierce the Night
A chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
ugh she is a total Mary Sue I cant read any more.
A chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Err.. the qualities of Slytherin house are ambition, cunning and blood purity, Not "Deep-set Hatred" or anything to do with hatred or misery, actually. :/ And I hope there's a good reason for her already knowing curses and hexes and having memorised text books within one day because right now your OC's coming off rather sue-ish. Other than those things i mention, This fic has started off good and i'm intrigued to carry on reading. But I do hope this isn't one of those stories where the OC has a tragic past with a dark secret that will change the wizarding world like this fic seems to be hinting at already..
Mari Wollsch chapter 19 . 9/17/2012
great story xxxxxxxxxx
slytherinslut13 chapter 17 . 9/28/2010
That has got to be the best way to deliver detention ever. I wish i got detention that way...
Blank1Blank1BlanK2 chapter 19 . 6/3/2010
this was a very good story keep up the kood work
LadyGrimR chapter 19 . 9/12/2009
I really like this story.
At the Heart of the Storm chapter 16 . 8/25/2009
OK, not that I don't love Eileen and Snape OC pairings BUT THIS IS RIDICULOUS! SHE'S 11 YEARS OLD FOR CHRIST'S SAKE! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW SICK THAT IS! IT DOESN'T MATTER HOW MATURE SHE IS! SHE HASN'T EVEN STARTED HER PERIOD YET!

I would adore this story if you'd made Eileen AT LEAST legal age! 16 sixth year!
SilverMistKunoichi chapter 18 . 8/14/2009
Awee! :)
x-EmilyTennant-x chapter 19 . 8/10/2009
I wish I had found this fic sooner, it is honestly the best thing I have ever read. Normally I don't read OC fics but the summary caught my eye and I'm so glad I read it. Most people make their OCs flat, with not a lot of personality, but I can honestly feel that Eileen is a real character JKR could've written :) You've done so incredibly well, and I seriously have never read something this good. You've got real talent, the whole flow of the story was really nice and it just all worked so well. I'm reading the sequel now :)
PollyWantCookie chapter 19 . 8/7/2009
I really really liked this story, it's great. But, actually, in parts it reminded me a little of Trudi Canavan's Black Magicians Guild trilogy, at least of the first two books.
thraxbaby chapter 18 . 7/27/2009
Oh my god! That story was amazing! I can't wait to find out what happens next! 3
thraxbaby chapter 2 . 7/26/2009
I like her.(Eileen) She sounds cool.
SparklesTheQueen chapter 15 . 4/19/2008
THE POLICE WHO0HO
Reniilee chapter 18 . 3/24/2008
...

XD

that was so beautiful and well written!

it had me biting my nails and wideyed the whole time!
beamingatyou chapter 12 . 3/3/2008
"Was he lurking in the shadows? He caught me out of bed once like that, nearly wet myself!" lol! XD

Oh jeebus, Snape got her a Valentine-dwarf-thingy. ;D

Aw. Aww. Aw. 8.8

That was awesome.

I'll read the next one... ;3

- beaming
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