Reviews for Breaking through the shields
Mukuro234 chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
I lved reading this
inuyasha1kougafan101 chapter 12 . 2/18/2010
please complete the story asap!
Akito10022 chapter 6 . 12/24/2009
ok no offense but:

1. i have no idea what the hell keeps happening, in the first chapter you have Naruto randomly kiss Gaara like WTH.

2. Again in the first chapter I thought he had to hid himself why does he show Gaara hm?

3. dude you need a beta reader -.-

4. you should really work on Grammar and protraying characters

5. it was a good plot but with the right person it would have become soo much better
siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 12 . 11/8/2008
loved it!
Unknown Scribe chapter 12 . 9/22/2008
Poor gaara. he just wants naruto to be happy.
Cha The Emerald Panther chapter 12 . 7/20/2008
OMCG I LOVE IT AND I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON

AND I THINK YOUR THE FIRST GUY WHO I'VE SEEN WRITE A YAOI STORY IN HERE SO I LOVES YOU FOR THAT

HM...ARE YOU GAY? CUZ THAT WOULD BE AWSHUM WELL ANYWAYS LIKE I SAID EARLIER PLZ UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN

~ Cookie

P.S. you rule X3 it's awshum when a guy writes yaoi
deathskeith chapter 12 . 11/14/2007
you are a damn genius! I love it! I hope there is more soon!
Megglesworth chapter 12 . 11/9/2007
this is awesome i like it
me chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Jus wanted to let you know, Gaara's brothers name is "Kankuro" jus helpin out
shonen ai fanatic 14 chapter 12 . 8/28/2006
SWET YOU SO HAVE TO UPDATE SOON AND BE MY FRIEND I WANT YOUR ASL PLZ?
criesbloodredtears chapter 12 . 8/16/2006
Wow, I really like this one *hugs phycotic Gaara* we!
angel61991 chapter 12 . 8/11/2006
interesting please update soon.
Kyree chapter 12 . 8/7/2006
Gaara really went psycho didn't he? Then again he was defending his kitsune wasn't he? I get the feeling that he won't be able to get away with it though.
chibiryuji chapter 12 . 8/7/2006
OMG! i couldn't believe he killed his father! well i could but i jus gotta say somthing stupid. good job kep on righting.
bookworm51485 chapter 2 . 8/6/2006
And this is one of the stories that perpetrates the stereotype that all yaoi stories are crap and just written by dumb little fangirls/boys with a fetish. This is just bad. I'm not even sure what I could suggest to improve it. I'd definitely start with a beta, but that just wouldn't be enough.
49 | Page 1 2 3 .. Last Next »