Reviews for Smile
MitsukaiYuki chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
this should be tragedy. i think?
he died? ahhhhhhh.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
why...does it have to be sad.
maddigirl1999 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
so sad poor Natsume -kun
astrid chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
beautiful!11 even if i don't know what chaste means...
Cuna999 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010


But very well written. A few spelling mistakes, but that's okay.

m-chann chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
aw how sweet, it makes me want to cry. i love it when storys have the thing when natsume says mikans name and she freezes or blushes or what ever, so cute. too bad natsume dies tho its so sad:(
killuanatsume chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
I'm one of Natsume fan XD.I loved this story that was sad but very wonderful you are very good I very liked this part"he was lying there with the most peacelul look on is face

And he was smiling"

Congrulation your fanfic is one of my favourites XD Do more fanfics

P.S sorry for the grammar mistake I speak french
GrEeNLuVer chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Maybellefic chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I feel really sad right now cause you made Natsume die but I won't kill ya since I know it's true that he might died T.T but still I love the story
Marshmallow73 chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
wah, im a natsume fan, and u killed him! well, its okay... i like your plot, story...everything, really...
faRHaNa chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
WAWAWAWA! You're mean...

I'm crying right now...

God! I can't stop crying...

Now, everyone knows I'm a crybaby...

You're just totally mean...

But I really love it...

Thanks for writing. I'll definitely read more of your fanfics.
uwindang chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
Why did you kill my Natsume?


me chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
miley chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
you stupid person you are not worthy of writing are mad
This Seraphim chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
It was after a few weeks later when everyone received the news of Natsume’s death. It was shocking to most students. They never knew of his situation and immediately understood when the reason was broadcasted throughout the school. Everyone regretted the way they treated him and went to his funeral. But whenever someone looked at the casket, they fail to see the resemblance of the Natsume they knew for he was lying there with the most peaceful look in his face and…

He was smiling.

- This has got to be one of the best paragraphs in this fic! The ellipsis adds to the effect, and the impact is a good one all-in-all. Four thumbs up! :)
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