Reviews for Fault
Misura chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
An adorable read, offering an engaging and appealing look inside Yami's mind and heart. This ficlet would be the reading equivalent of a piece of chocolate - sweet, uncomplicated and delicious.
Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
_ Nice fic!
Yai Kuu chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
That was such a cute story. One never does see fault in the eyes of the one they love. Yami and yugi never seemed a pair to me untill i started reading stories like yours. Now i can think of no one better. Awe insipring story. Dragonlady80906/Yai_kuu
SnowIce chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
This was sad, yet beautiful. I don't know why, but you made it sound real. I like that. Good job. _
crystal tears of betrayal chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Daikaio chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
This was sad but sweet. Nice work.
kingleby chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
this is so sweet _ bless poor yami
Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
that was cute, really good!
Growing Pain chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Allow me to say, "Aww" _

How truly sweet. This makes me wanna change the ending all over again (seriously, what a crappy ending! No yaoi love! Hehe, just kidding _ I liked it. Sort of)

This ending you have here proved interesting, showing he is with his priests and such. Living, or something. I always imagined he'd be dead (never been the one to think of spirits living on).

Nice story! Nice fluffyness! Keep it up!
tinkletimekelly chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Cherry chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
*cry my heat out* That was sad...Very well written! You did a great job!