Reviews for Beneath the Surface
guest chapter 10 . 8/23/2014
Apparently , I had the sudden urge to comment so ... Yugi! Why are you doubting Bakura?! He's your soon-to-be-lover!

... I think I had more sugar than the usual ... If you'll excuse me ...
TetraOfTheInternet chapter 18 . 3/28/2014

"Fool. Nobody can assist him."

Love, Marik & Malik Fangirl.
Nitishu chapter 8 . 1/7/2014
...and the age old saying goes 'if you love something let it go, if it loves you it'll come back' _
Nice story!
kurobane101 chapter 3 . 11/28/2013
Kura only said that cause he doesn't want other people to see his Yugi striking sexy poses Nya
Deadly Shadow chapter 7 . 7/19/2013
Misty "Ha-ha-ha! Loved this chapter!"
Rain "Read. The. Next. Chapter. NOW."
Misty "Um... Rain goes psycho over this story. Sadly, I do to. Do the finishing line Rain now!"
Rain "Good story, etc, etc, now read!"
Deadly Shadow chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
Misty "Well since our cute puppet stroke a sexy pose how could I resist?"
Kira "*Groans* Misty your forbidden from reviewing until you take control of the flirting attitude!"
Misty "Whatever, anyway great story!"
Angel "*In hiding* W-what she said."
Kira "You scarred my fiance with your flirting!"
Misty "Seems he can't handle hardcore flirting. No wonder, he's engaged to you my toy. Anyway, I thought I was forbidden?"
Kira "Whatever. Just shut up and leave him alone."
Misty "Alright, alright! See you later."
Angel "God! She needs to be put on a leash!"
Kira "Says the one in hiding."
Angel "Whatever!"
KeiMaxwell chapter 20 . 3/25/2013
This was a very interesting read for me. I think it's actually the first Kleptoshipping story I read. I liked the first few chapters the most, I have to admit, probably because with throwing Marik and Malik into it and all, it was almost too many characters and their different issues. I was also worried the changing POVs would get on my nerves. But overall, you did manage to weave it all together quite nicely.
The amount of doubt you put in here, especially Ryou's unforgiving attitude, made it realistic. The plot would not have worked with all that drama going on, that much is for sure. I liked Mai's role in this, although her diva-like attitude did manage to get on my nerves a bit, haha. I also liked Bakura's character development a lot.
Okay, before I comment on every little thing, let me just say: Good job, I enjoyed this!
Rain of the Forest chapter 20 . 11/20/2012
Okay! That is NOT fair! Why won't you make a sequel!
Silver-Haired-Thief chapter 20 . 10/19/2012
Great story! ;)
Cele-chan1 chapter 20 . 5/31/2012
TT aw that was such a sweet ending! i love this fic and i definitely think u got ryou to a T
This-Pen-Name-Is-Too-Long chapter 20 . 10/2/2011
Amazing! Amazing!Amazing!Amazing!Amazing!Amazing!Amazing!

You are a writing pro. I love how you wrote this. Everything was perfect! :D
MeliLouiseNorth chapter 20 . 9/3/2011
Loved it, fantastic fic, poor Yami, got to put up with Malik

One question, if the ring was the only item that could find the puzzle piece when it was right under there noses?

Anyway really love the fic
Spindlegal chapter 20 . 7/16/2011
This story was so incredibly brilliant! The way you built the plot and made all of the problems click to each other was great! This Bakura was definitley a new one that I've read about and he's personally my favorite.

I think you really captured everyones personalities and let me just say I almost peed my pants at everything Malik and Otogi did and said. True, Malik is insane and has a childish personality, but he's unvelievably cunning like a fox. He seems to look ahead of things and is actually very smart in a sense. I just feel bad for Yami who has to live with that goofball!

And I'm also extremely glad how you made Yugi grow up mentally and physically. I'm one who loves an OC Yugi and while you did keep his personality I have to say kudos for giving him more appealing looks! I love yugi/bakura pairing it's so sweet and one of those "whoa baby!" kind of relationships that is unexpected. I kind of wish Shizuka was there with them for Otogi and Honda to fight over, but there was so many relationship interferences (er problems however you wanna put it) from everyone else that I guess it would have been kind of hard to write in. Anyways I looooove this story soooooo much XD
andysanime chapter 20 . 6/28/2011
Really good job on this story and I must say that Malik deserved what he got for hiding the puzzle piece XD.
The Harmonious Rain chapter 20 . 4/5/2011
Loved the story. Not a big yaoi fan but this story is an exception. : )

~Sorceress of the Black Rose
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