Reviews for Cycles aren't Parallel
Tem's Promise chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Made me smile :)
777angeloflove chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
hmm...intresting...
Neko-chan the Mewse chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Yes, this is most definitely true! I'm glad I'm not the only one seeing parallels that shouldn't be parallels! Really, they aren't clones.
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Ver well written and realistic.
kirallie chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Good. Interesting to see it is Naruto who sees what is happening and refuses to be a part of it.
imanokie01 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
REally good. :)
XxBookScarxX chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
I like this. You really delved into his mind with a unique and thoughtful perspective. This is the naruto I like, smart and level headed. He will not allow anyone to control his destiny and has a clear view of what kind of person he wants to be. I would love to see more of this quality work from you.
Gomjibar22 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Nice, I haven't read anything like this befor and I liked it.
neverbetter21 chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
nice story!
KaiPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
thank you...just...thank you...cycles have to end somewhere...i applaud all those who choose to end the cycle that they have fallen into...and i weep for all those who stubbornly instist on clinging to the cycle even though it hurts so many, just becuase it's familiar...LIVE, don't repeat...we are told the mistakes of our elders so that we can learn a few lessons without having to make the same mistakes
nwfairy chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Why Jiraiya want to throw a bachelor party?

-doesn't get it-

But good story
Shulblaka Saphira chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
That was strange but nice in a way...
StarsOfYaoi chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
that was one of the best shots i've read of naruto. it was... beautiful, to say the least.

it also made me feel a bit sad, because it felt melancholic to me, as if everyone, except naruto, has lost something important in their past that will never be found again, some sort of sad thought about what they can't change...

naruto can still change, and i think his is the right way to think. not similar to the past, he wants to be someone of his own, to prove himself. i admit i can see the team7 in the sannin, and some of kakashi's team, but... they are too different. i really love what you explained, and the way you did it, it felt... a lot naruto-like, a lot real.

i thank you for writing it, it was great.

keep on writing, you are awesome

SOY
stupidweeaboo chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
AWESOME
December Jewel chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Awesome! You go, Naruto! Great story.
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