Reviews for Before
Queen of Night chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
i love editing! anyways...it's kinda confusing to keep up with in the beginning but u kinda start to understand it later on...but i asume all with be explained in later chapters...toodles
you're my Star chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
It was sweet, and you write really well. Hah, I was looking for angsty breakups, but you made this sappiness work for me. )

The grammer mistakes, did take from the story, but they weren't incredibly major.

The ending line was brilliant, since she'd been living in the past for so long (too long). It was lovely.

-Sam
Lyrielle chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
hm. interesting story. i like the overall plot, but I felt it to be too confusing for me to fully comprehend. otherwise, nice job.

-Lyrielle
n3rd chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
this is good. i like it:P
Fanciful Sovereign chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
excellent story - I love the idea of living in an uncertain future and clinging to the past, and also how scarred everyone is, but yet how they are still very much alive. I really enjoyed this.