Reviews for Demon Serpent
Mamid chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
Wow! terrible terrible story!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/7/2017
Wish you finished this from the sounds of things you had them ready to go but didnt kind of annoying
Onishin Tsukitenshi chapter 15 . 7/7/2017
Please update soon.
Meryan chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Gratulacje... powielasz stereotypy:)
Guest chapter 6 . 5/6/2017
Are you fuckin retarded? No, that's not a question. Why are you autistic. Better yet why add child porn into this? Your seriously fucked up to see little children that way. And yes, I'm pretty sure your into that after seeing this.
Jen Black chapter 8 . 4/25/2017
I'm. The only one who noticed that the author doesn't seem to have read or watched Naruto right?
fenixrojo36 chapter 15 . 11/26/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
Spartan-017 chapter 4 . 11/4/2015
Hope you have a fun time trying to take over the world to make yourself an emperor. There will be competition for you to be named Emperor of the World and one of those people is me. So good luck with trying to conquer the world
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 15 . 8/19/2015
I have to say while the story is good the many mistakes infuriate me.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 7 . 8/18/2015
Sasori is from this Naruko would be Kushinas sister not Minatos.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 6 . 8/18/2015
Dude the Yondaime Hokages name is Minato Namikaze.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 4 . 8/18/2015
Orochimaru,Jiraiya,and Tsunade were taught by Hiruzen Sarutobi the Sandaime would know this if you actually read/watched Naruto.
oleg212 chapter 15 . 2/28/2015
When are you going to continue the fic?
Rat-Man chapter 15 . 8/1/2014
Update please!
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