Reviews for Demon Serpent
fenixrojo36 chapter 15 . 11/26/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
Spartan-017 chapter 4 . 11/4/2015
Hope you have a fun time trying to take over the world to make yourself an emperor. There will be competition for you to be named Emperor of the World and one of those people is me. So good luck with trying to conquer the world
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 15 . 8/19/2015
I have to say while the story is good the many mistakes infuriate me.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 7 . 8/18/2015
Sasori is from this Naruko would be Kushinas sister not Minatos.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 6 . 8/18/2015
Dude the Yondaime Hokages name is Minato Namikaze.
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 4 . 8/18/2015
Orochimaru,Jiraiya,and Tsunade were taught by Hiruzen Sarutobi the Sandaime would know this if you actually read/watched Naruto.
oleg212 chapter 15 . 2/28/2015
When are you going to continue the fic?
Rat-Man chapter 15 . 8/1/2014
Update please!
DD chapter 14 . 3/18/2014
Full retard.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
It's a great story but there teacher is named hiruzen not kenji
ChronoFury chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
So far I am enjoying this fanfic, but the only thing that erks me, is that The Sandaime Hokage's name is Sarutobi Hiruzen, other than that I'm enjoying this fanfic
mick chapter 6 . 6/13/2013
what an idiot. really...he only should have kidnapped nukenin or criminals. he has no justification for using normal people or kidnapping orphans. nor using akemi. nor controlling anko's mind.
although it is fun to see him rave... there is little to no logic behind his blatant changes in morality.
DEBob19 chapter 15 . 2/21/2013
You should update xD And tell us what happened to his daughter!
Lucan chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
Great plot. Weird, choppy writing. Sometimes you said some really obvious things that don't need to be said. At least in the way you did. Also, I don't think a 10 year old CAN wank off, but I personally don't want to know... It was just awkward. You could've just said something like, "if only I were a little older". We don't need the visual. It was just weird and at that moment I decided that it would be the last chapter I'd read.
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