|Reviews for Maiden Of Stone|
| ShiroTsuki chapter 21 . 3/14/2013
Dude...this story...it's so...so...awesome! Uhm, brilliant! So cool! It was long and took me time to finish, but it was all worth it! I loved how Red X was all "I do what I want"! Oh gosh, I'm fangirling so much right now! And the ships? Holy potatoes, you make the best ships! I especially loved how Terra and Red X's relationship developed. Gah, no words can express exactly how I'm feeling.
All in all, RedXTerra is now my favorite ship. C'mon, how can you NOT love that ship after reading this story?!
| johnvictor23 chapter 12 . 6/2/2012
you must not really have a heart for Red-X to with someone he loves and have him turn against his friends for his fucking family.
| carlos13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
| Coldsting chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I read your first book in the amount of time of about a day. Ihave to say I was impressed. Mournful Slade didn't die. Then I found out you wrote a sequel and a sequel after that. I am looking forward on to reading this book and the next.
P.S. I am glad you brought back Terra.
| TellatrixForever chapter 13 . 9/19/2009
This one is one of your best.
I have one critism though. The last time I checked the Desert Eagle wasn't a Revolver, It was a semi auto.
God Bless You.
| One chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
My favorite of the whole trilogy (needs more reviews!), I love how Sanza is still striding across the fine line of right and wrong, black and white.
This time he seems to be taking on the mantle of being a hero a little bit more, but still thinks being a thief is his role.
Let's see if a certain blond can change his mind...
And the whole Red X/Terra thing is a great idea, he needs to get over Cleo...
Also the whole 'morally grey' theme these first two installments have had is really nice, Sanza just does what he likes!
I really like how you make Red X's morals do come into play, like how he still thinks he 'owes it to BB', to let him know about the Terra predicament and the usually 'save my famillia' thing.
Though once again I like how you made the story more 'realistic', people can die, life isn't a fairytale and well in general, 'shift' happens.
| DragonTamer186 chapter 21 . 2/14/2009
Once again dude you amaze me this is better than some of the movie sequels
| Tianimalz chapter 17 . 8/26/2008
Oh, I am so ashamed of a reader to not leave a review until now. I got SO into this, I havn't stopped reading since the first one I posted. Seriously. I havn't even eaten anything and my butt hurts so bad now, LOL!
So far, I am just blown away, I mean really, BLOWN AWAY. This is one of the best, more plotted out fics I've ever read, and I love it. I've been showing it to everyone, because it is that awesome. My favorite scene of all, hands down, is when Red X ran in to save the kitten, but Cyborg and Raven beat him to it.
"THAT WAS MY SAVE DAMMIT"
I was just LMAO for thirty minutes straight. Seriously, I couldn't breath xDD!
This is putting my fics to shame, I just love how you connect with Red X and the other characters. Though I sense him going a little OOC a few times, I think you got Red X down really well. The drama in this is mind bloing, and omg the action. It's just like "BOOM BOOM BOOM" without leaving me much time to recover, which isn't a bad thing.
As a BBT (And X/Ter in secret, LOL!) fan, I'd like to see them more . but this is fine just how it is, seriously.
I am SO SO SO SO SO SORRY that I didn't review more! I just got so into it. I had my teeth clenched during the fight scenes, and now my jaw is in utter pain. My wrists hurt from pounding on the desk and everyone is yelling at me to shut up and stop cheering Red X on, LOL.
I can't believe you don't have more reviews! But then again, people like me get lazy and to into the fics xD! (I really am sorry.)
But -sigh- yeah, this was... jeez awesome. Darn bed time, or else I'd be reading right now. All well, I'll get back to it soon 8D!
Thank you for writing this!
-cough- BBT FUREVA -cough-
| Tianimalz chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
-cough- okay I know you told me to read the first one first, but I'm a rebel so NAH! Hahaha.
I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THESE! Since I started my own Terra/Red X trilogy, I've been wanting to read someone elses take, and I saw these and was like "OMGOSH!" so yeah, SO EXCITED.
"Of course I’m selfish. I’m Red X."
LMAO! Loved that, srry. That really made me laugh, it was so him. Your so good at playing Red X, it's like... scary. O.o; And Red X being spanish... that makes sense. Really, I wouldn't have thought of that... guess that exsplains why his theme music is sounds latan, LOL!
Awesome job! I can't wait until I have time to read some more chapters. Their so long, it's hard to remember what all happens with my feather brained mind xDD!
| RxS4Lyfe chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
Dude, 100th review! I can see that this is going to be as amazing as the first! Penultimate story in the trilogy, I have so much to read! I won't bother you anymore for now, I must continue!
| KentuckyAngels chapter 16 . 4/6/2007
Hm as werid as it is me saying this I like the idea of X and Starfire (and I'm a die hard rob/star fangirl ;)
When a fanfiction changes your views on the show you know it's gotta be good.
| DonCactuar chapter 21 . 1/14/2007
Wow what a story or two stories. I have to say I liked Maiden of Stone much more than The Life and Times of Red X if anything because it cut down on the Sanza real life segments and focused more on the plot and Titans and character interactions. Another thing I liked was that there was no Slade, but a new threat with new villains. Although one thing wasn't clear to me was, did Beast Boy in your fic stay with Terra or still went for Raven and no before you say anything I ain't a shipper, just curious so I would like a response.
I have to say overall I'm glad you don't wimp out of using realistic themes like the idea of death, serious injuries, bleeding, or rape existing in the real world which were absent from the cartoon, so having all these men and business men die or what happened to Cleo was unique. Although to be honest a part of me was hoping that Sedaris to win and take so many lives (Hey it's a fic I can dream can't I?). Maybe you should make a fic in which the Titans get killed, hey just a thought since you made me like the villain Sedaris. I liked how "tough" you made the guy.
One thing that did get kind of annoying that isn't the swearing at times or the real life Sanza segments was how many times the fight segments were a little too long in which it was like a tug of war between the villain and the Titans/Red X in both fics. You should probably shorten things a bit because it does get a bit frustrating and slows/drags the overall chapter and prevents actual progress to get done. Another thing was how certain interactions felt repeated like the Beast Boy and Raven talking interactions or Terra constantly breaking down.
However overall it was a solid story, but I would have liked some proper closure on Terra, even if she felt better at the end of your fic was she you know...staying with the Titans? Staying with Beast Boy or will Beast Boy go for Raven, etc. As for Red X it's obvious that the ending meant he was going to be himself and just do what he wants from there on whether it's a thief or a hero at times depending on the situation so that was nice that he stayed like how he was shown to be in the X episode of the Teen Titans show.
I know you don't have anymore Red X/Terra fics that continue from this story so I guess I'm done (I really enjoyed them since I like Terra and the Red X characters from the cartoon), will you consider reading my Kingdom Hearts Teen Titans fics now that I'm done reading yours? You said you wanted to read them, so well there you go and keep up the good work.
| Ken chapter 21 . 8/15/2006
Much better ending than last time. Well done!
| Slade's Downfall chapter 8 . 8/15/2006
Too lazy to log in, I have more qualms about this fic than I did in the last one. This is a poor portrayal of Christianity as Sanza is a "Christain" but doesn't act like one. I hate the stereotypical portrayal you have here. The story's concept is good, don't get me wrong, but this is giving my faith a bad rap. And although I'm not a Catholic, I don't like this element of the story because they already have enough problems in real life...you know all those molestation allegations over the past few years and that.
Don't get me wrong, I still like the story and I'm still reading, I just need to get all this off my chest. It's hard enough being a Christian in life, and being misrepresented in a fan fic makes it feel even harder.
Yeah, you're story is good, not great, but good, it would be better if you just made X an agnostic...I still like the fic and I'm working my way through it. You can delete this if you want, that's why I made it an anonymous review. Just had to say it.
I like the BB/T stuff too, BYW, clever way to bring her back. I hope you'll still read my fic, I'm not mad at you per se, just Sanza for being such a hypocrtie. *goes over and shakes X,* "Get your act together will ya?"
| The Jason Cooper chapter 21 . 8/13/2006
I've read part one and now part two. Both trilling,and very good. Keep up the good work with part 3.