Reviews for Beautiful
omasuoniwabanshi chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
The best line of all was:

For the wolves, Cheza was Paradise

You could have even ended it right there because it summed up so beautifully the way the wolves felt about Cheza. Sure, they were going on the journey, but it was for her and because of her.

Nice job!
Terry-McElrath chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Hi, Zig-zag!

You're on a roll! Two lovely 100-word ficlet challenges? You did a very nice job with this one, too. I enjoy Wolf's Rain and I really like how you depicted Cheza. A couple of spelling corrections, though. '. . . her sent,' should be 'her scent;' and '. . .tired sole,' should be 'souls.' I'm very impressed! Congratulations on your lovely ficlet!