|Reviews for Freezing and Melting|
| Hatake Tsughi chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
That was good XD
| reeby10 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
m so nummy! hehe loved it! :D
| Lovely Spell chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
umm wow so much umm wow... good story i likes... hehe i can never write that way... i'm too shy... but i love it good job
| MellowRachello chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
wow, that was amazing, I LOVED IT :DD lol
| DandyxRandy chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Yay! Tis was a very lovely story. five stars! *
| edluver chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
*clap* cool story! great job!
| RandomTopic chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Nice. I liked this.
| Tiger-san chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
lovely story. you really have a way with words and your good at writing lemons. i hope to see more from you
| Priestess Silence chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
This was very good I think you should write more, you are very good with your wording.
| FirieGurl chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
that was pretty good update it soon
| nopenopnope chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
one word, yum!
| Kage of the village hidden in the Blood chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Let me explain this to you Yaio loving peoply V.E.R.Y. C.A.R.F.U.L. IS straight why the hell else would he read those books hu... sorry yaio pisses me off.
| Deep Blue Dragon chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
(drools on her keybroed) yeah smut kakairu smut love it keep it up
| DCourtes chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
[constructive critism] This story was very hot and the way you aroused Kakashi good, but I don't quite understand how suddenly Kakashi went from broken and sore to being able move, especially after the way you described that horrible beating he got from the gaurds.
I think this story needs a little more detail as well, but I understand that not everyone is a detail freak like myself. Being an artist, I'm in love with simplistic details, which this story seems to be lacking a bit of, but since this is your story, it is your decision to alter it.
I didn't find any grammer mistakes, and only one typo so I congradulate you, since most stories I know hardly go without a few grammer mistakes and typo's.
This is it for my review, if you do decide to alter it, I would be more than happy to read it again and tell you what I think.
| Phantom Girl6 chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
This is very good. Good old Iruka, taking care of Kakashi _. I like this.