Reviews for Best Enemies: Redux
shinneodeus chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
What a good way to distract. Telling her parents that Shego accepted the invitation. Crafty girl that Kim. And now is Kim turn to start thinking of Shego in the romantic way. HAHHAHHA

And even Drakken was glad that Kim was safe. Where that goes? I want to find out. And Shego. Stalking Kim and giving her chocolates that represent her. A very possible freudian image there.

At finally I am enjoying your short chapters. Been reading some authors with big chapters so this short chapters are a nice change of pace for me.
Etherelemental chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
Even though I remember that last part, I still got a kick out of it. _ Though, I think that the airplane bit was new, but I can't really remember. _ But I have been wondering how many more you're going to add here; as in new chapters. And I'm also wondering what else you've opted to add in these revisions. Anyway, I hope the next update comes up soon! _
ken chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
Sweet, I love the clairifications(sp?) of what each of them were thinking and feeling as they are trying to deny their growing feelings for one another. The scene where Shego decides to "follow" Kim to see what she's doing and the scene with Shego and Drakken's reactions to the plane rescue were awsome.
mouserr2255 chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
fear the green woman with the rusty spoon gents especially if you have shadowy intents with KP ... theyre both showing signs of grabbing a clue and itza bout damn time ... i still think the rescue of the airplane is 1 of my fav moments from this series tho the ending lines rank right up close to the top for this story

Etherelemental chapter 7 . 6/9/2007
That was definitely interesting. Although, the part where Monique's commenting on how Shego wants Monique to spy on Kim isn't something that I agree with. I mean, all Shego's asked Monique to not tell is the number that she gave her. Apart from that, Monique could tell Kim all about it. But, it's probably a difference in opinions again for me. Anyway, I especially enjoyed the bits of Shego having broken into the Manager's office and read some files. _ I'm wondering if any of that's going to come up later in either other fics or in any additions to this one. _ And it certainly seems to be moving along quite nicely. I hope to see more soon!
shinneodeus chapter 7 . 6/9/2007
The one outside sees things that the people involved haven't realized yet. So Monique and Kim's mom have noticed that Shego and Kim are developing some kind of Monique ask Shego if she has experience with women. And now that Shego is starting to see Kim in that way.

Read you later!
ken chapter 7 . 6/9/2007
So, THAT'S how Monique got Shego's phone number. It definately clears up how Shego knew Kim was in the hospital later on in the story. And poor Shego, thanks to Monique she now has Kimmie fantasies on the brain (insert manicial(sp?) laughter here). And the bit there at the end clears up why and how Shego knew Kim wasn't available for those friday's(I think that's the right plural spelling).

Oh, and are you going to keep the "Shego's dirty trick"(by Rinacat, right?) scene? That was a riot!
A Markov chapter 7 . 6/9/2007
Your original story is quite good. Well written with an easy flow that captures the feel of the show. It's amazing to me to read through the redux and find so much more to know and love about it. This chapter fills in very nicely a whole I didn't even know was there when I read the original.

mouserr2255 chapter 7 . 6/9/2007
i love the conversation between Shego and Monique, i dont think Mo understand the kind of honour she is getting there tho cause Shego answers the questions honestly which is a rare thing for her i think and to top it off she trusts Monique enough, review or no, to give Mo a direct means of contacting her ... id bet not even Drakken has that number

theres some saying about slippery slopes that applies here, Kim has already started down it but is trying to crawl back up and Shego is just getting going ... its gonna be fun to watch as they lose control of things and crash in the upcoming and inevitable train wreck to come

ken chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
I liked how you worked that reference to Jean's parents from your later one-shot into this chapter. the rewrite continues to rock.
Etherelemental chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
I can't really tell anything that's different here. As it all just flows pretty much the way I remember it. But oh well. _ I hope the next revision comes up soon. _
skyz chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
I'm loving the more insight into these chapters, King. It makes it all the more 's nice to see that Kim and Shego both are thinking about crushing on one another. Can't wait for the next update.
creativetoo chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
I'm enjoying this story more the second time around with the improvements that you're making to it. :)

Great story to begin with. Greater story now. :)
mouserr2255 chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
had to log out to review for a change ... anywho on with tha review

Kim shoulda known draggin Mo into the mix to help feel things out between herself and Shego wouldnt go quite as planned, then with Mrs. P showing up all the ingredients for a disaster were present and whats obvious to others is either ignored overlooked or flat out denied by the two at the centre of the mess

of course the central figures are always the last to glom a clue and in Kim's case it took blatant statements from both the mother unit and the bgf ... its gonna be fun watching the two of them figure things out

my gaurdian HaruHara chapter 5 . 6/7/2007
I just read your last two chapters that were so good.

Even after waiting a bite you have clogged my brain with complements for you and speculative thoughts that if something in my brain pops I am so giving you the credit
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