|Reviews for Tenebrae|
| Ubermann chapter 2 . 9/11/2006
hmm your story is getting interesting, i like the comic refrences like the second brother blood, and jason blood who is one of my favorite character in jla i found his character unique. well until the next chapter doc. take care
| TDG3RD chapter 2 . 9/11/2006
I'm happy to see you back working on this story. I wasn't sure if it had been discontinued or not. I can certainly understand how hectic real life can be.
Anyways, another good chapter. Cool to see Jason Blood and Etrigan show up. It was interesting how Etrigan looked down on Raven for only being half-demon. I got a good chuckle out of the Beast Boy/Raven/Robin scene, as well.
Until the next update.
| Chris Johnson chapter 2 . 9/11/2006
Thank God you are finally back the site was starting to suck without your writing and authors similar to you talent. The only ones who kept it good over the summer were callipoe and wind lane. I liked this chapter a lot though I will admit that I kinda hoped that you would bring in Dr Fate I liked him a lot. However, Jason Blood was a more logical choice. My only suggestion would be after Raven asked Beast Boy to stay with him I think that you could have made it a little more fluffy. My opinion is the first time a couple sleeps in the same bed, nothing sexual involved here, or couch they would be a little nervous no matter how close they are just cause they are used to sleeping with anyone so they would probaly talk a little until they felt more comfterable.
| Tarah21300 chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Ahh, brilliant story! I have to admit, using comic book refrences, like how Elastigirl was an actress, and adding Sebastian, can really make a story worth reading! I've also noticed that you haven't updated in quite a while(which I don't blame you since I haven't updated two of my stories :D). Hopefully, you can update soon? I(and I'm sure anyone else reading this story)would greatly appriciate it! *puts you on alert*
| Tammy Tamborine chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Hm, very intersting so far._ I look forward to the next chapter.
| WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
yay you've continued! Love it naturally and I can't wait for even more. you're doing such a great job! poor Raven..and I like what you're doing with the relationships btwn Star & Rob and BB & Rae. Very cute and very believable. I just love BB!
| Gothic Fairy Kytana chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
i didnt review on the paragon one but that one was really good. quite frankly i really don't like teen titans but these are some decent fanfics of what i've seen of the show. i hope you update soon.
| BBcrazed chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Waz'up Doc? JK
Can't read it all now but your one of the best writers on so I'm sure it'll be grate!
My friend read The Paragon. Said it was the best BB/Rae She'd EVER read (And she's read A LOT of BB/Rae fics)
E-mail's all broke-y so just keep up your work without me! XP
Thanks for all the entertainment, Doc!
| Egglette chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
(Someone shoot me for saying that...)
That pretty much sums up all I can think about this chapter, besides the hugely annoying (if not flattering) 'wow' repeated in caps over and over until your mind goes insane and you're driven to click the little 'x' in the corner.
(I've seriously gotten a review somewhat like that...although it was appreciated...it hurt my eyes.)
Anyway, hope you update soon!
| t-titansfan chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
you told me once that new postings would be some time off because you needed time to get new additions to the best quality you could. having read only the first chapter, i can say the ends seem to justify the means. (and it's fine season 5 doesn't have hold here. wasn't much in the way of development, just new introductions.) i won't pretend every part of this fic was easy for me. it took a little while to get a point that wasn't over my head. your muses do you a great service.
ps: i was rather surprised to be reading about young Brother Blood. i have gotten slightly more canon-savvy as of late.
| Coeus chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Hmm... very interesting. I like how you weave together elements of the show and the comic, but still keep your own distinct style. Very entertaining so far. Paragon of Animals was a fantastic story, and this one promises to be every bit as good. I am certainly looking forward to the next chapter.
| 6StringSamurai13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Wow...this is everything I hoped it would be. I'm so glad the next installment in your series will focus on Raven. LOVED that first scene between Raven and BB; not too mushy and still very antagonizing :-p. Loved the scene with Robin and Star too. LIke the scene with Raven and BB, the characterizations and dialogue fit perfectly...hehe the line about the Sushi from Star is just SO her; she's just too cute for words sometimes :-p. Hrm...very interesting decision to bring some of the comic book elements into the cartoon universe; I think it works perfectly. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Loved the scene wiht Raven in the bedroom...the imagery was exellent, and her thoughts were very well written.
ARGH...this chapter was AWESOME! I can't WAIT to see what comes next. Keep up the good work as always, I can tell this is going to be an interesting story already!
| They-Call-Me-Orange chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Hmm... where to start? Let me try to gather my scattered thoughts (they flew in all directions when you blew my mind; and that's only with the first chapter!) I love the fact you brought Sebastian into this, that will definitely make things a bit more interesting for everyone involved. The Raven/Blood arc was one of my favorites, definitley the last great story-line before Johns One-Year-Later-ed us, but we've both been through those rants one time too many so I wont even go there. Cyborg's search for Jinx certainly spices things up a bit, and the little peak into the lives of Star and Robin lightened things up a bit.
The mention of Rita brought up a question: Will the Doom Patrol eventually play a part in this (or any of the other books)? You really are a great writer, dude (I know my thoughts are a bit scattered but, that can be explained by how I opened the review- y'know, blown mind and all). I love what you've got here so far and I hope that you can get the next chapter up a bit sooner. Congrats on the great work, Doc.
| Zosha chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Wow, it's so good! I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved the Paragon of Animals and I am very excited to see how this will turn out. Update soon!
| Lambbaby chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
I'm reviewing this as I read it and I have to tell you that my favorite line has got to be the last one from Star in the sushi resturant.'"The chef seems to have forgotten to cook my food"'-classic line.
Thanks for the shout-out but puh-leeze all I did was offer some suggestions that came to were the one who made them the way I love thevocab in this story. Grimoire, necromancer,apostasy ...seriously I'm definitely feeling the word choices enough I find that when people write about a certain character they also choose their words in the nature of their wording here is definitely Raven.
As for Seb,I have a feeling he'll be even more freaky and creepy in the chapters to description of him by the teeth always bugged me cause what kind of crazy fool would actually file their teeth?It's gotta be a painful thing.
What did you do with Jinx?I know you wanted a side story on her but did it have to be now?Bring her can visit Star City and the rest of the places later.(Although I'm kinda thinking she should stop in Bludhaven and visit Nightwing.)Cy obviously misses her and I don't think I could deal with him being the third wheel with the other two couples.
Poor marks are back. Poor poor dear. You're really going to torture her in this one aren't you?Darn too bad okay?We want our girl to be okay and able to hang out with Gar 's always odd to see Raven poor girl must be wondering if her father has found a way is much much cause he's got that crazy "We're meant to be"thing going on.
I don't even know why I reviewed. You already know I love it and am behind you on this fic. I wouldn't have encouraged you if I didn't think it was what's next Doc?I'd tell you to send me a text but I haven't paid my cell bill yet so my phone is d.o.a(I spent the coffee chocolate)You know how to reach me for questions though.