Reviews for Cruciatus
KlausMikelson chapter 15 . 11/4/2011
interesting
Storm Warning chapter 15 . 6/15/2011
3 this fic. Update it?
unexpected sabotage chapter 15 . 3/22/2011
Omfg! Update please! Dx I WILL FUCKING LOVE YOU! HELL I'LL BRIBE YOU WITH THE AWESOMEST OF CANDIES JUST PLEASE UPDATE Dx lol don't suck hairy man titties! Dx
unexpected sabotage chapter 15 . 3/22/2011
Omfg! Update please! Dx I WILL FUCKING LOVE YOU! HELL I'LL BRIBE YOU WITH THE AWESOMEST OF CANDIES JUST PLEASE UPDATE Dx lol don't suck hairy man titties! Dx
RainBlueWater chapter 9 . 2/7/2011
great story
jstareader chapter 15 . 10/26/2009
I'm so happy to see that you updated this story :D

Please post more soon!
Cassienova chapter 15 . 10/11/2009
sweet you updated finally! I love this story it freaking rocks!
wagner710 chapter 15 . 10/9/2009
Such an exciting story! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
tanama30 chapter 15 . 10/9/2009
omg i can't believe it finally an update. i was so happy to see this. also, it was great to see the girls fight and win. faith the hero of the day finally she has gone through alot i hope she makes a good recovery. update soon
tanama30 chapter 14 . 5/30/2009
again great update i hope to read more of this fic. update soon i love what i have read so far
Luna's Meow chapter 14 . 12/10/2008
Well, once again I have found a good fic. (Thanks to Jinx.) I don't even really use ffnet anymore but I tend to like any fic she does so when I saw she was reading this...

Anyway, good storyline, actually kind of original, which is hard to find in this fandom. Way too many fics have fallen into the conventional stuff. Keeps me interested, and I stayed up most of the night reading 'til I passed out. Glad you made it Fuffy, don't really like B/A fics all that much, although I do like his character.

The only not so good thing I could see is maybe a little touching up on the descriptiveness? But that comes with experience. I remember my fics that I have on here... Horrible compared to what I do now. I had a great beta who I learned a lot from. He basically told me my description sucked on a massive scale and why. (Yours doesn't, trust me.) I read my stuff, looked at his, and instantly saw what he meant. The improvement that can be seen from my OLC fic alone... I looked at the first chapter and the last chapter and was like, wow... I sucked. So yeah, you're not anywhere near as bad as I was, but a little touching up would help a lot. Still anxious for you to update though. Keep it up!
Luna's Meow chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
{robably found this fic too late for the vote to make a difference, but I'd be voting for Faith/Buffy.
Jinxgirl chapter 13 . 11/2/2008
Amazing chaper all around. I loved how you had Angel react, very funny, and I like how you had Dawn understand Faith and Buffy telling her in exactly the right way that she loved her too. Awesome
Jinxgirl chapter 11 . 11/2/2008
Oh poor Faith...poor everyone. I'm glad Buffy realizes that she loves her now...she /better/ get a chance to tell her,lol
Jinxgirl chapter 8 . 11/2/2008
YES! Go Buffy, definitely the right reaction *grins* Love it.
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