Reviews for Stu's side of the story
PokeJedi chapter 15 . 1/26/2014
Oh God.
What is this exactly? It's just poor grammar and spelling errors. First, don't put so much caps in it. Second, don't rush death scenes, you need to put a bit more detail in rather than, "And then, a car appeared and killed spencer!" Also, don't rush the backstories, that girl lacey or lanley or whatever "She was Jade's rival" was she? I didn't see her in the rest of the story. Finally, do your research on the main characters backstories (like 2D) he was in s cona after he got the first fractured eye and he was in Murdoc's car when he got the second one.
2-D love forever chapter 23 . 12/13/2010
awwww, u should'v said that 2-D killed paula! :d anyways, good story, funnnnnny, i knew as soon as i saw ur user that u were funny! :D
Blackheart Ace8 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
wrong it was blue at the time
Phoenex360 chapter 23 . 6/16/2007
Ok... great wonderfull story! I doubt Muds would say oh my God... he says sweet Satan instead! The number one band in America? I highly doubt they were thinking about America when they did this! They ARE in England. What happened to the accents? Over? OVER? Golly... Oh well... kepp the writing coming!
Phoenex360 chapter 18 . 6/16/2007
Yeh... you said D cant play an instrument... hes on the keys...
Phoenex360 chapter 17 . 6/16/2007
GR I... been there, done that. Its ok so far... i have seen better, but i have seen much MUCH worse. It is a fabulous story. Better if Paula wasnt in it... but i guess thats needed...
Phoenex360 chapter 15 . 6/16/2007
I... HATE... no, not strong enough... DESPISE... still not right... erm... forget it. SHES A STUPID BITCHY WHORE SLUT BASTARD MOTHER FUCKER... Gr! Sorry...
Phoenex360 chapter 14 . 6/16/2007
Wait... JOY DIED? When? And he has an eye. Its an eight ball fracture, i think. The eye fills with blood or something. But its there. Good so far...
Phoenex360 chapter 9 . 6/16/2007
Ok... i understand Spence is dead... but WHAT? The way the accident was described... HUH?
Phoenex360 chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Well, his natural hair color is black (hin hint (eyebrows)) But thats ok. No story interferance!

Why didnt he ask the guy where his class was? Aw... shes so nice. Is she gonna die? Do not respond!
RaMenAddicT chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
WEE! That was short and cute awsomnesstiss
Plastic Emotion chapter 23 . 8/21/2006
YAY! This story was so cute, yet sad at the same time, too...Next story! Whoo! Doncha just love fanficition? XD You feel completed once a fic is done...

LoOnY-LeMoNs chapter 22 . 7/24/2006
Five was only five places. Very funny, Murdoc must've Update SOON!
LoOnY-LeMoNs chapter 21 . 7/24/2006
2D/Noodle! YAY! I am so happy! :D I love that!
Plastic Emotion chapter 22 . 7/24/2006
*dances* WHOO-HOO! SHE'S GONE! XDD She drugged is that what happened? XD She's sorry for missing out on both. That's hilarious. NOODLE'S COMIN'! YAY!

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