Reviews for Le Gasp
Netherman14 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Edo is actually The Doctor?!
ChocolateLizz chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Ahaha, there goes the fourth wall. xD Poor "Chazz" and "Jaden" got pwned by Saiou~~
theMidnight.Rainfall chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Haha. Hilarious. I had to read that twice. Although, I actually like some of the English names...I love the part where Edo and Saiou are pretending to be gangster!

Keep up the good writings!
anon chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
XD That was funny!

The 4kids thing was true though.


God, who comes up with this stuff anyway?

Anyway, Sartorious is a muscle? Really? Weird...

I love your writing!
Alice in Despairland chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
OMG XDD lol. That was funny XD Especially the whole Neji Hyuuga thing XD Me and my friend were like the only people who noticed that Neji and Saiou were unusually alike XD Anyway, great story!
No More Fanfiction for Me chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Congratulations! You're the second author this week to fully hold my attention to a story. (cause mostly I only scan stories XD)Actually, I like the dub names, but this was hilarious! - I love bashing 4Kids. Well-written, very funny. Great story. :P


(Sartorious is a muscle? Really?)
KESA Alexandria chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
LOL "Sartorious" needs to get laid! and the gansta? I LOVE IT! SO FUNNY

especially the butt cheeks comment
torpedo chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
Please don't make me laugh again. Just...please.

~limps out of room holding sides~

On another note, I -adore- the way you write. It's mind-bogglingly LOVELY.
TehTwinkleAlchemist chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
LOL!Yeah,a flower.I typed Aster into Google and that's what came ,I seriously love the name Aster.(Keep in mind I saw the dub first)It's the crocodile I'm mad ?Honestly,SHIRLEY?Of course,If I feel pain for anyone it's the one with the name like a breakfast cereal...

'Start your day the Jurassic Way,the Hassleberry Crunch!'Lawl...

I dunno if I've said this before but I'll say it are,without a doubt,the most brilliant authoress in the Yu-Gi-Oh/GX keep could be famous one day.

ReaperRain chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Hahaha...that was hilarious! I do love yugioh GX, even the dub version, but it'd be so much better if 4kids hadn't got their hands on it. I don't mind some of the dub names (Jaden, Zane, Chazz, even Syrus...) but I agree that they could have done better than 'hassleberry' or 'sartorius' (I mean, come on! Where the heck did they come up with THAT?)

I think I loved the gangster bit best, especially:

“The past five minutes did not just exist—do you understand me, Edo Phoenix?” he hissed in the sternest, threatening manner he could muster up with dignity after posing to be a wannabe gangster.

Wonderful! I don't normally like OOC-ness, but it works wonders for humour. Great story!

Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
that was great

i do agree that the dub names are stupid. 4kids should die *_*
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
true, true..who the hell comes up w/ those horrible horrible names...and yeah what can be more american that 'ed'oh well the story was funny...i wonder what the creator think when they see what the american have done to their story...
NegoArgentaeDragotea chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
OMG! Hilarious! Totally love the Naruto-Neji reference. It's so totally true! Anyways, write on! I'd love to see another fic from you, cuz you're a totally an awesome writer!

P.S.- Love da gangsta talk.
spoonlord15 chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
In case you are wondering, Rose is Rose. Very little, if any, dub changes.
The Meta chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
... the hell? well that sure was interesting and funny as all seven layers of hell or in flames. hey.. i just made that saying up but i like it! anyway, it was really funny! but hey, i think that aster is kind of a cool name. but it does make you wonder where the names came from... i mean, edward elric is a cool character and we all know it! lol. anyway, i like it a lot
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