Reviews for Your Broken Lullaby
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
sexion chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
Awh, you write great poetry, and I'm going to go read your other ones later because this is teh SPIFFY! XD
Dark Mornie chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
i'm so in love w/ this darn poem *o*!
Princesa7 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Hi, you asked me to read one of your stories so I did. I would have read another, but I really don't like FullMetal Alchimest. But that's alright, this poem rocked, as twisted as it was. I'm not a great poem writer, as you can see in Bloody Kisses. (I've got one poem there, and it's ghastly.)

Great poem!
Fluffy-sama's lil girl chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Kara-chan:Amazing! Your so cool my poem for gravitation suck compared to yours!*sweatdrops* i'd like my hikari to talk to but she got drunk and hit her head so now she's in the hospital!*Tsu-chan is Verry real!XD* So instead i'll have kira talk... not that she actually talks!*seatdrops*


Kara-chan: asnd on that note i'd like to request a poem...if i can? I like evil marik/Yami malik poems that are MxM!So if you don't thats okay with me!XD
Primevera Took chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
O.O Fabulous, as usual!

RB, if I'm not mistaken. You've got a way with wprds, I like how the hikari is compared to most cherished treasures.

It's just so easy to picture the yami saying all these things, with the threat at the end and the hikari crying at the lullaby. It's really beautiful and entrancing

Thanks for the poem!

Primy (happy to be your friend)
Vanya-Deyja chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
YES! EVIL YAMI! So good _

Must fave...*Glares at people* Review damn you! Falmers will burn in the pits of hell! MWHAHAHAHHAHAH!

_ Thank u so much, me likey! I can't write well on request but if you want something i'll try...