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![]() ![]() ![]() So fluffy. It was a great little one shot |
![]() ![]() That was amazing! I loved it! Beautiful! Good job! |
![]() ![]() The feels are sooooo real! Wow! I need a Fakir on my life! |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOODNESS IT'S EVERYTHING I STAND FOR. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy your writing, you're very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUUUUDE ILOVETHISSTORY AWESOMEJOB |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sooooooooo cuteee! It was well written to where everything that I read I could see play out on the Academy flawlessly. Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was pretty nice w would be nicer is there was another chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() X3 Yeeesss! Love this! The plot was cute, fun, and really quite in character, I think. There were some phrases that seemed a bit off or repetitive, but nothing which the characters said. And being a first fic, those 'flourishes' that are really just a bit over the top will become more obvious to you. (notably: you don't need to rephrase 'eyes' or how you refer to a singular person every time you do) But this was very well executed! It makes me giggle and grin. X3 Great job! |
![]() ![]() lol it is about bloody time jeez! |
![]() ![]() Hahahahahahha AWESOME |
![]() ![]() It is about BLOODY time! Those two got together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I just love this! Especially that last comment - "It's about bloody time." :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great for your first but only hoped to get better and write more im writting my frist lemond and its hard bbut i enjoy princess tutu,writing,ballet,and fakir x ahiru |
![]() ![]() Amazing! Really love the Femio part. |