Reviews for Can't make you wait, if you don't want to
Audio Pineapple chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
It was good - although the speech marks confused me as to which character was speaking. Esspecially when they're stopped for a comma or a full stop becuase I can't work out if it has changed character or not.
HogwartsHoney chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
amazingly written well done!