Reviews for Veins Aren't Murder Weapons
LiMiYa chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Striking word imagery. But the last paragraph was the most haunting.
Gwen Luthael chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
wow... yet another AWESOME STORY! how do you do it? i loved this, it was bittersweet and lovely... keep writing!

Egyptian Princess of 1290 bc chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
wow the sorrow i loved it one of your bests yet yeah this was great so full of emotion ans wow. great story, loved it. you rock
3285 chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
It's really sad, but beautiful. That bit at the ending really drove it home too. :( Lovely.
Miss Blaylock chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Pretty angsty, girl. But lovely, nevertheless. ;)

I love the way you write Trinity, mainly because I can actually imagine her behaving like that. Dark, strong and romantic at the same time.

Nice work, keep it up! :D *blows a kiss*
Sydney Andrews chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
It's a very jarring piece of writing. Particularly impactful was the "veins as murder weapons" concept. Very affecting.

Lovely work. Hope to see more!

Pjhoisfhd chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Wow, that's sort of sad that Neo and Trin were never really talked about after they ended the war. :( *sob*

Continue to write!