|Reviews for The Choice|
| JessicaK7 chapter 4 . 3/11
THIS IS EPIC. Okay, normally, I am a SonicXSally fan (Sorry all you Sonamy lovers, but Sonally happens in the real stuff! :3) but Amy is the perfect character for this! Very well done! Like candy for fans of Sonic like us!
DONT STOP READIN' THOUGH...
I really...really...REAL IE,want you (since you are awesome at this.) to take a peek at my story, "Sonic: The Last Standing". Please? It is like this in one way...you will see it once you get to the 12th chapter...
It isn't finished yet (over 30 chapters excpected...ugh...), but any of you? Please read? Thanks! "
| Sonic128 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Wow, i loved it. The last chapter was very sad, but i loved the 3rd chapter and all the others. Great job!
| Ivo-goji chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Ahh. After all these years, I've finally found this story again! One of my favorite Sonic fan fics of all time! I remember reading it for the first time on the Netraptor archive- before the subsequent chapters were added even! Such an excellent idea, carried out so flawlessly. It is a pleasure being able to read it again.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
Ouch. To be honest, I like all three versions. Yes! Even the last one. That's probs my fave. I dunno. I'm not sadistic. I just like characters thinking stuff through, and constant sap isn't enteraining anymore. (Except when it's Zelink...lol) great story!
| Shadamy scenic chapter 3 . 7/20/2011
The only weird thing is that Amy says "sonikku" too much. Other than that, wonderful story!
| jazzy of the Akatsuki chapter 4 . 2/20/2011
OMG. all i can say is wow! i read this story last year and im suprised i didnt review. anywayz really good story! i really liked it how you told wat would happen if sonic chose his legs are not. for some reason the last chapter is my favorite,idk why though.
this story was kinda sad but happy at the same time so yay!
anywayz GREAT story!
| magicallydeliciousxoxox chapter 4 . 12/12/2010
Awwaahh. Excellent job on the first chapterr, but I'd have to say that this one is my favorite ending. I'm a real sucker for angstt. xD
| The Teenage Bibliophile chapter 4 . 8/16/2010
The story kinda confused me for a sec, but after reading the last chap, it made sense. *cue light-bulb* Alternate endings, brilliant! Anyways, love your work! Can you maybe wright a Shadamy? I've been looking for a decent story and can't find one. If ya know of any good writers, could ya let me know? Thanks, TB
| janiemanie1993 chapter 4 . 7/11/2010
hm. on the whole, it was great! i liked it all.
it really is the ultimate choice. no one ever does his walking ability vs amy. it's always a life for a life thing. it was well written, and mostly in character. i know nothing about robo knux, and i don't think anyone else does either, so this was the perfect villain to chose. also, amy was very in character. she is extremely empathetic, so she defiantly has the ability to do all those things. adding shadow in the last ending to stop him was a very wise choice, considering his background. i LOVE how all the endings had some of the same elements and lines (ex. sonic couldn't live without amy. in every story, there is a little of him acknowledging his 'death' with amy's absence or death).the style for the story was very good, and there were no grammatical mistakes.
BUT (please don't let that scare you!)
there is really no way we would ever know sonic's choice. i appreciated your first ending, because it was what was needed. just like 'the lady and the tiger' or whatever that story was. it's alright if you were semi-forced, i don't blame you ;). your first two endings (incubis and lifeline) were really good. but another reason he wouldn't want amy to get hurt i think would be because he sacrificed so much for her, it would be sinful if she got hurt similarly or died. plus, i know it was your weak point, and you even said so, but the last ending wasn't nearly as severe as it would have been, i think. but i don't blame you there, either, if it's not your strong point, it just isn't.
i know this is long, but a in depth, thought provoking story deserves this, ya know?
| 01SonAmy01 chapter 4 . 7/5/2010
I...I don't know what I can say...
This story has opened doors that I never saw.
I am just gobsmacked!
It is so amazing I just- wow!
It really made me think about stuff and it was so emmotional!
Well done! :O
| SilverDawn2010 chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
Best SonAmy ever. Nothing else I could say would do it justice. Thank you so much...
| SonicAmyRoseLover chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
It was good, but a little confusing. I can't tell what was going on through the story, and the last chapter is strange. What did Sonic actually choose? Why were there so many different versions? In future, you could make a little easier to follow. The chapters on there own were good though!
| Misaki Kamiya chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
Very good fic. I liked that you gave us all the endings and not just one. Despite been sad, I really liked the 2nd and 3rd endings, because the 1st seem to me like evading the choice; however that doesn't make it bad.
Don't hate the last chapter, sometimes is good to read a story that's not full of sugar to remind you that life is not total happiness. I really liked the last chapter.
Sorry, this is too long. But, again, really good fic.
| windsister chapter 4 . 5/13/2010
This reminds me of these books I had as a kid, the make-a-decision-and-turn-to-such-and-such-page, and you basically got to decide your own ending. They were great, but I somehow had a habit of picking the worst endings each time. Fun, though. ;D
Anyways, GREAT concept! Haven't seen anything like it here yet, and I lurves me some originality, yup yup!
The 'cripple' chapter was great! Not OOC at ALL. The life-altering conditions make his sudden tenderness and emotions towards Amy understandable, not too mention you allowed an ample amount of time for them to evolve, and it wasn't an overnight thing.
All in all, fantastic idea, and great job pulling it off. Character depth, exploration, and evolvement was super, and the action scenes were smooth to boot.
I look forward to reading more of your work! : )
| Midallion chapter 4 . 2/19/2010
Wow. All I could say is wow. If I would be put up with a situation such as Sonic, I have no clue what I would do. But I think if it was between chapter 3 and 4 I would say that sacrificeing myself would be the better pick. Even though I couldn't walk, the other captive and myself would both be still alive. If I had chosen the other, then I would have two choices: A. Going on with my life full of regret and sorrow, or B. Do the same thing Sonic did. I believe that Sonic was faced with an impossible question. If I (again) where faced with the situation I would have to think ahead and how each choice would effect my life in the future. But I believe that as a human I am clearly imperfect and so is my mind. And as a human I see myself as a greedy person that just wants whats better for me. (I believe that if we where all faced with the question that we could see ourselves as somewhat greedy in a way.) And also that this is a question that either way there will be something that you will regret and that is impossible for the human brain (no matter how complex) to make a decision on even though it if faced with decisions every day.
I am terrably sorry if I bored you with a bunch of drabble (which it is just from what was on my mind at the time.) but thankyou for your work on this and have a wonderful day!