Reviews for Natural Defenses
satomika chapter 8 . 7/28/2012
heeeheehee...

im glad they all have babies in the end and no much bashing... :)
satomika chapter 7 . 7/28/2012
ahhh...

now i think i understand what you meant by convenient...
i think, no matter where it is, as long as the proposal isn't being dropped casually like a nuclear bomb (spur of the moment, yeah) that's what being NOT convenient is...

i think...

well, sometimes, i kinda dont even understand my logic; but i feel like no matter what words tumble out of my lips, my gut knows what im supposed to know, no matter how chaotic my mind is... :]
g-love99 chapter 8 . 9/1/2011
best ryro ive read, thanks!
ChiChi-O chapter 8 . 7/31/2011
I love this story, it's so beautiful and happy! i absolutly love happy endings and am glad that you gave John and Marie theirs. You're writing and style and characterization is amazing and I enjoyed the relationships between all the characters (espiecally John and 'Aunt Misty'). I can't wait to read more of your stories.
atopthewatertower chapter 8 . 5/1/2011
wow this was a really great story and well written, really enjoyed reading it, i'm really getting into the ryro thing...lol i'll always love romy but ryro is starting to tie for first xP...again, awesome story :D
coup fatal chapter 8 . 12/11/2009
guh the awesome love in this story makes me smile .this :D
del chapter 8 . 8/14/2009
this is by far the best ryro fic ever. great job.
indefinitelyhigh chapter 8 . 5/8/2009
Ahaha! I love it!
Cheann de na thit chapter 8 . 4/6/2009
aww so sweet, i like how all the characters are involved in some way or another, and the way it all works out for each person in a different way, it gives the story more depth.

xx
hotbritt5000 chapter 8 . 1/26/2009
That was an AMAZING story, I was crying at the end and some parts through its full of emotion and the way you wrote it made me feel everything. :P Doesn't help im listening to 'Crash and burn' by savage garden (very good song!)And once again I Say AMAZING! lol.
SasukeBlade chapter 8 . 5/17/2008
I have so much love for this story! I didn't really like John in the movies, but now I'm seeing him in a whole new light. You've converted me to Ryro!

Thanks for sharing this great fic with us here on .

SasukeBlade
FluidDegree chapter 8 . 1/15/2008
this is an absolute wonderful story. I loved every second of it.
TaleWeaver chapter 8 . 9/11/2007
Damn, I LOVE this story! There's not enough Pyro/Rogue fic, and not nearly enough good Pyro/Rogue fic, and this is both! Any chance of more, sometime?

I think what I liked best is that, in some ways, this is exactly what Charles Xavier dreamed of - that you could live the life YOU choose, no matter if you're mutant or not. That you can work to overcome your mistakes, and be judged on what you do now, rather than what you used to be.

Your versions of Rogue and Pyro, are so very THEM, just older and wiser, which is great. I liked how John kept thinking and/or saying things which scared him shitless, but said or thought them nonetheless because he was mature enough to know he meant them. I especially liked 'Aunt Misty'; it was nice to know that there really was some true affection in the Brotherhood. Also John turning down the invite to join the X-men, and Marie understanding why.

The proposal was just lovely. It wasn't some romantic dream, but it was what Marie wanted. Emphasises that everyone has a different idea of what makes them happy. And the bit where John spends weeks asking Logan for Marie's hand in marriage was very snicker-worthy; not to mention, it underscored that Logan had passed up the chance to be Marie's romantic interest to become her family (which is a theme I worked on in one of my Ryro fics). And as an Australian myself, I LOVED Marie having the golden wattle in her bridal bouquet.
Child of a Pineapple chapter 8 . 7/30/2007
Ohmygosh, I loved this.

Great job!
seapinks chapter 8 . 3/27/2007
Ugh, Ryro ftw. I think this is one of the best out there.
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