|Reviews for Famous Last Words|
| A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Excellent story, Penny. Very vivid, very tense and exciting. Great dialogue.
I love this exchange:
“He fell through the ice,” Sam said. “I didn’t know what to do, Dad. I was trying to keep him warm, but…”
“It’s okay, Sammy,” John said.
I love it because I hate it. We saw how displeased John was with Dean in Something Wicked, yet when the positions are switched, 'It's okay'. Does John really expect that much out of Dean? Why give Sam sympathy when he couldn't give any to Dean? Was it the nature of the incident? This is in no way a deficency in your writing- these are the great questions I ask myself! *hm...*
Great ending. Gotta love Dean and his brash emotional displays. *grin*
Thanks for sharing,
| Isobel Swan chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
A very good stand alone.
I agree with your description of Dean asking Sam to pull his finger etc being their way of saying "I love you". It is them all over.
| carocali chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Very sweet. I really do enjoy the childhood glimpses into what probably happened to them as children. You write them so well.