Awww! What an amazing, beautiful story! And I absolutely love how it ends!

AAA! this was a very nice story, really, :)

Thank you. I cried a lot. It's beautiful.

This is a great ending I love it, but then while I don't really mind endings as long as they flow with the story, I am a sucker for a happy ending.

This is really a cool little story. I was truly surprised at the ending - which rarely happens in fanfic ya know. I was sure he was going to have to die to join her, or that you were going to pair him up with her daughter which just felt... icky. I truly love how you wrapped this up. Thanks for it! -Clare

OMG this story was so beautiful!

It made me cry. Please continue writing, you are a great writer.

Again, you take me from the anxiety of action, to the depths of angst, to the joy of a happy ending. Great job.

wow that was a tense story! i'm glad it had a happy ending though! I loved it! :)

Best. Laby. Fic. Ever.

i love it, its brilliant, well done, keep on writing!

ah...yes, they end up together! ) You rock, and this story rocks!

Yet again you've done all I wished for! _

The thought of him turning back time to save her was sweet,

but then it felt too selfish. She'd been happy.

If he'd of changed the life she was able to live just to keep her alive for himself,

i'd of felt a tinge of hatred for him :-p

To let her go, for her life and her kids, shows a much greater love for her.

Aw. The daughter let her mommy go ;-; ((Despite her age. A mommy is a mommy))

Still loving and embracing Sarah, despite her old age :) Im glad for that visual.

And now she can be young for him _~

Oriental, I completely heart you.

Your stories are always strongly felt, no emotion left untouched.

You reach a new deepness within this story. Of sacrifice and love.

Giving a moment to reveal within every unhappy ending ((her leaving)), still lingers a differant happiness ((her family)).

I loved this entire fic, and I'm glad for the ending _

You had me, for a moment, almost accepting Jareth being without her for the better of her children. Instead, we got a double happy ending! _

Sarah got to live out her life with her husband and kids, and Jareth regained his love in the end :)

You never dissappoint me _

Congrats on another captivating story.

So far, another beautiful story from one of my fav. Laby writers _

Honestly, im proud of you for giving Sarah a HAPPY life after Jareth.

Far too often she lives miserable, consumed in thoughts of him :-p Which is sweet..but nobody EVER just makes it so Sarah is okay. I'm glad someone finally let her live her life. A husband, two cute little kids _

I dont think you strayed from Jareths character from Sarah in this chapter. I would imagine thats exactly how he'd react. After all, she was the only thing left that brought him peace.

A beautiful moment within her memories, and im glad there was one for Jareth _

My favorite, so far. Emotions are captivated beautifully.

I'll continue reading, of course ;) And send off one last review when I finish.

OMFG! I absolutely LOVE this story. I recently decided to start reading fanfiction stories based on the movie due to my love for it, and yours is one of the first I've read. It is gorgeous! I was on the verge of tears at certain points due to your beautiful ideas and writing ability. So, I felt that I should definitely review this wonderful story that you decided to write. Thank you for giving me something great to read in my spare time. _

Yay,another happy ending...Wow,i thought u'll goin to kill them ending,love it. n_~