Reviews for If I Asked You To, Would You Kill Me?
Qwerty-ness chapter 29 . 6/8
I LOVE this story ;) It's very original because it feels like 90% of stories on here are Fax/Mang. And about 20% of that is about max leaving the flock. This is the only story I have yet to see that Introduces a new character and has Max fall in love with him. I really hope Derringer will be alright. ;( Please don't kill him. -A loyal Reader
Shadowolf chapter 15 . 6/6
The Faxness in me is screaming no, but I'm reaaaally hoping for Derrin X Max because it seems so right. Thanks for the amazing story!
Agent Skye Of Shield chapter 29 . 5/23/2015
Beautiful story, Mä Cherè, just beautiful.

Just one question... What happened I Fang/Blade?
Guest chapter 29 . 10/11/2013
COME ON MAX CAN'T FALL FOR DERRINGER THAT WILL LITERALLY KILL FANG AND IF IT DOESNT HE'LL PROBABLY KILL HIMSELF
Mimi Sutcliff chapter 29 . 7/8/2013
Please continue! I'm dying over here!
Mimi Sutcliff chapter 9 . 7/7/2013
I, love this chapter
yufsdhuvvf chapter 29 . 10/25/2012
WTF? Derringer died?
Bob chapter 29 . 9/23/2012
Update. Soon. Hurry. I. Mean. It.
dragonlady3000 chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
no offense, but you have too many exclamation points. tone it down a little
Guest chapter 21 . 7/5/2012
OMG this was so sad! It made me cry- and i don't cry for anything! It was very well written and i feel that you could go into farther depth on Sky's past and even make a separate novel about it. Good job. One of my favorite chapters so far! :)
f chapter 29 . 5/27/2012
UPDATE PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSE!
pondsplash800 chapter 29 . 3/21/2012
The song is really nice! I'm going to search it tomorrow. Another nice song that reminds me of the flock is "Fly Like a Bird" its a Catholic song we sing in chior a lot, the first line is "fly like a bird, to the Lord, my soul. I want to soar, like an eagle" please get this updated soon
Vyanni Krace -666 chapter 3 . 2/16/2012
This was really interesting to read and I really liked this chapter. However I have on little tip to give you:

Dont use so many !'s in your sentences. It just ruins the tension. I found it hard to take a few of the sentences seriously until I imagined the !'s were full stops intead.

Other than that it was good.
P chapter 29 . 1/14/2012
Now I know where that song is from, I couldn't place it the first time I read, but now I know, it was in Thumbelina.
kieraa chapter 5 . 1/8/2012
That chapter was really gruesome... I loved it ;D

(I'm probably raping the review button but this story is soo worth it)

xxx
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