|Reviews for Ashes To Ashes|
| riverrat chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Beautifully written ficlet.
| Known Unknowns chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
| sammyfish chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Brilliant :) You're descriptions are incredible. Especially all the beautiful flame imagery in this one. Combined with the sense of farewell, it's a beautiful piece. Well done :)
| Visitkarte chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Thank yu.
| KaryInTheSky chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Wow, this piece is really beautiful. The way you journey through Fawkes’s mystical process is amazing, and the description you use to describe that particular moment of the story is great as well!
| Vinyaya chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
wow, this was really, really good. dude, it was practically poetry! I need to learn how you people acheive this height of proficiency! I'd give you advice, but since your way better than I am at this, I guess I have absolutely nothing to contribute. I just know that I loved it.
| the-original-hufflepuff chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
I'm truly speechless, for this is beyond fantastic and an amazingly original idea.
The way you describe everything is spectacular, and I can see/hear/feel whatever you write.
Mesmerising in the highest sense of the word, and definitely merits being added to my favourites :).
| Emerald Olive chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
This is so fantastically original. I honestly think that you have written something that is completely one-of-a-kind in this gorgeous little fic. I am in love with it.
The way that you show us a scene that we all know, from a different pair of eyes, a pair of eyes that nobody would think to look through, is just so refreshing. Your descriptions in the beginning were unbelieveable, especially the descriptions of the fire and how it affects Fawkes.
This is too fantastic for words.
| o0Anonymous0o chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Amazing fic! You do an excellent job exploring not only Fawkes's experiences as a phoenix, but his perceptions of Albus as well. You truely make a very flat character in cannon rounder, while still making it seem believable. Thank you for allowing all of us to read this very well-written piece of fan fiction!
| RyanKathrynCelia chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
Well, this is just fantastically written. I love the way you describe the flames encompassing Fawkes and how it makes him feel both complete and completely seperate at the same.
This is going on my favourites list!
| Frayed Misfit chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
You have written a truly mesmorising piece of work! I cannot imagine how difficult it would be to write from Fawkes' point of view yet you have done so in such a realistic and delightful way. I am nominating this fic at the Reviewer's Lounge Forum for Most Original Story, as I have not read anything that comes close to the originality and wonder of this. Well Done.
| Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Waah! This is amazing. Love the fire imagery, love the pictures this paints in my head (oil painting, with loads of colour and brightness) love, love, love the canon at the end.
Dumbledore is beautifully in character and theres some marvolous description in this. Nice look at Fawkses character too. All in all very well done :)
| Mrs. James Harold Potter chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
*Claps* Great job! Its a different perspective, from Fawkes's POV. Phoenixes are intelligent creatures, and it was interesting to hear what was going through his mind that night.
Keep up the lovely writing,
XOXO Mrs. James Harold Potter
| SweetSouthernGal chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
aaw...very sad, very touching. theres a lot of description of the burning process, which kind of a got a little wordy for me- but that may merely be because its still pretty early for me (especially considering how much sleep i got). anywho, its a good story, fab job.
| LadyMarauderette chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Thats all I can say to describe that.
Okay, maybe I can add a bit more.
It is seriously, truly brilliant.
i'm surprised you havent got more reviews.
It's great, you really have a talent for writing.