Reviews for Responsibility
Firefury Amahira chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Nicely executed! And pretty damn good for a first time writing in first-person POV. Heehee, I see what you meant in your review of Anathema about pulling inspiration from my rendition of the characters, I'm honored )

Your Valerie is a bit saner at that point than my Valerie was, but you've got an excellent little snapshot here. The slight jumping from one thought to the next fits well for a character in a difficult situation. All in all, a short, but nicely executed piece. Congrats!
AirGirl Phantom chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Aw... This was really awesome! And sad too. You're a talented writer!
at-a-glance chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Wow this is fantastic, I liked the reference to nosferatu. Keep up your wonderful writing.
Evilevergreen chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
I enjoyed reading this. I like your style. This was your first POV fic? You should consider writing it more often.

Great job.
Sasia chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
You did this really well! You've got a knack for getting into Valerie's head. If that's why he did it, Valerie would probably be having those exact thoughts. Keep writing!
Chastaine chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Wow...really nice seriously. Awesome. :D