Reviews for The Light and the Shadow of Loneliness
Danny Ketchum chapter 7 . 1/10
This story is pretty good, don't get me wrong. I just didn't like the pregnancy thing. But that part was totally up to you. This pairing is decent for me. I still liked the Ayame x Sakura story way better. But the way you developed this story was nevertheless interesting. A decent plot but I didn't like the pairing. The lemons were pretty good considering.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/1/2016
This was a very great fanfic. I loved the hole thing
Guest chapter 7 . 5/27/2015
I thought I was a great story. A few spelling errors here and there, but all in all one of the best written fanfics I have seen.

On another note, a Sakura, hinata or Sakura, ino would be good
Jose chapter 7 . 11/12/2014
This was a good story but is there more about there life
jose chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
What happens to them next please tell me
Biblio388 chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
Good story. Author did a fine job of telling it.
Karasu Kodi chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
I'd say next time you want rape in a story... Just say it happens and don't show it...
Karasu Kodi chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Nice first chapter. Like the action in it
birthofthecool chapter 7 . 2/27/2011
Strange story.

For once, Sakura deals with the rape a bit to easily.

Then there are strange statements, like that some of the older The DNA jutsu is quite ridiculous.

Last but not least, the wooden dildo sounds more painfup than full of pleasure.
Reggelfreggel chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
Ari chapter 7 . 7/17/2010
I think you couldve been a bit more discriptive inthe fighting scenes, and make the sex scenes a bit more different than the one before. Other then that I really liked your story!
Black-Blue Moonlight Neko chapter 7 . 4/5/2010
:D! i fuved it lolz
Jazzy-chu chapter 7 . 8/19/2009
Well, it took me longer to read this one. Solely because I have been busy lately, what with school starting and all. But, as are all the others, this one was great! I LOVED the baby idea! so cute! well, im off to read more! lol

~~Jazzy-chu )
sayalovesdiva chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
I didn't think her story was dull. I thought it was sad. I like your story can't wait to read more.
Emi Takahashi chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
great story
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