Reviews for If at First
Sonny3032 chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
Fucking. Halarious.
Stars Of A Blue Moon chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
"Well of all the..." *whacks him with a toilet plunger* XD LOL "And the toilet plunger had just been freshly used too, pity." LOL. *falls off chair* LOL!
Capital WHY chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
First question of Morty's killed me. XD



P.S. Don't worry, it was only from laughter.

P.P.S. So it was a good thing.

P.P.P.S. And I'm better now.
Zoom chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
...Steelix has the power to take a dump on command.

Goodness, that was a good bit of whacky humor. :D
Silver12Jirachi chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
! XD
Anon chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Oh, good God...poor Morty. Funny story though.
dreams.of.destiny chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
*has just fallen off chair*

It was so funny! (But that's obvious...)

Disturbing how Steelix...shyeah...*sweatdrops*

just plain entertainment!

Michelicious chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
lol! the title reminded me of a crapy joke... if at first you dont succed dont try parachuting! LOL!

good fic and nice humor but the thing i like the most was the cuteness of morty! I mean hes so nervous! AWw...

keep up the good work!

C ya!

Susaga chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
funny funny stuff!
Angry Freak Girl chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
This story is hilarious. There's no other way to describe it. It's also well-written. We need more Pokemon fiction like this. You've done a great job, sir.

Of course, I'll have to go back to reviewing crap. But this is anything BUT crap. People need to read this and get a good laugh out of this, and all your other stories. In fact, GameFreak should offer to publish this in an anthology and let everyone read them, so the whole world can laugh. Hell, you might even brighten the day of some poor "EMO" kid.

Keep it up.
Haruko-Mizumi chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Okay, that's just plain weird, but funny. Can't wait to see more from you!